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Old 06-25-2003, 03:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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My Search Is Over...
Hey, this is my first post onthe forum. This was REAL dedicated to my best friend...maybe one day I will get enough guts to tellim how I feel...enjoy

Your smile is like nothing I've ever witnessed
Never before have I seen such beauty and innocence
Through your smile God expresses His satisfaction
To smile back is the only justified reaction
When you smile angels spread their wings and fly
And for that moment all evil dies
Time is nonexistent when I look at you smile
And if it were, every second would be worthwhile
Hearing your voice uplifts my soul
Only in your presence do I feel whole
If love was my religion, in your arms would be my church
All my life I've been looking for love,
And the day I met you was the day I ended my search


A work in progress...


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Old 06-25-2003, 03:32 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow very pretty nice flow nice wording just
nice overall just to beautiful seriously wow nice jobbb u should def tell him the truth how u feel he will love itt
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Old 06-25-2003, 03:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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"If love was my religion, in your arms would be my church"

That was a nice line. This was pretty good short and sweet. Welcome to the realm, hope to see more from you

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Old 06-25-2003, 03:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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If love was my religion, in your arms would be my church

^fav. line...very nice fa ya first drop here...like some alreay said...welcome ta tha realm n' i'll be on tha lookout fa more of ya work..stay up
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This was tight...i mean i am really feeling this...
i like the ending the best personally keep it up
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Old 06-25-2003, 03:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i'm feelin the piece....i can relate to this. be sure of what you want and then go for it. otherwise you might be losing sumthin good. keep ur hopes up and pray you have the power to tell him how u really feel.
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Old 06-25-2003, 11:49 AM   #7 (permalink)
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wooooo god damn that was hot to def.

if you cant tell , i like that one a lot good job

stay up keep doing your thing and peace
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I want to thank everyone for showing me love 4 my 1st drop. ONE LOVE and may God bless

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Old 06-25-2003, 04:30 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Hey, You guys seem like you would know how to record in audo format. I'm new at all this but I'd like to see what I can do with it. If you can help me holla back

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Old 06-26-2003, 01:44 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Guys I know you prob. don't really care but I just sent this poem to the person I dedicated this poem to. I'm so nervous I can hardly stand it...wish me luck
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Old 06-26-2003, 09:43 AM   #11 (permalink)
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welcome to the forum...bit of advice....u want more replies.....repy to some other peoples work.......k....but back to the poem

it was nice......heartfelt...and i see u sent it to the guy...how'd it go.....
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Old 06-27-2003, 03:19 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I feel ya but I just joined 2 days ago and I have replied to 35 posts...I'm makin my rounds.
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