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Old 06-25-2003, 12:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Summer Days

Silent eveningss, holding warmness hostage
Pressing calmness under my mind's soft covers
Cautious footsteps, alwyas alongside you
Im in love, but us, we arent lovers
Feel my eyes, just handle the expression
The window to the bottom of my soul
Covering, im scared of the confession
Inevitably gaining no control
Whats the difference in loving and ignoring
Nothing in this world seems lucid
Once you wake up dreaming in the morning
Your heart gives you an option, use it.
Love patiently awaits as time you save
But those who want are those whose heart is brave


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Old 06-25-2003, 12:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very nice nice very niceee
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Old 06-25-2003, 12:52 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-25-2003, 01:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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this was a very nice piece...wish it was a lil longer....
keep it up

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I liked this one too. Heeh, I'm havin a blast in this forum...a lot of talent. One love

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Old 06-26-2003, 10:01 AM   #7 (permalink)
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nice lil drop u got here....nothing really stood out to me... but still a nice piece....up for ya
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