Things Fall Apart ( 2nd Entry )

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Old 06-24-2003, 11:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Things Fall Apart ( 2nd Entry )
The more things become clear....
The closer i draw myself near...
Rain drops on the window pane....
The silence of loneliness i hear....
Please release me....
Free me from this misery....
My heart yearns and moans....
A deafning , unfriendly tone....
What i once considered a bliss...
Faded into pain's mist...
Ive been touched my dissapointment's hands....
Caressed by misery's kiss.....
How can this be.....
The sweet smell of harmony......
Collapse into death's embrace.....
Looking up into his cold pale face.....
Help me.....
Help me find what i once possessed....
The love....
The joy.....
We once manifested....
All is forgetten.....
All we forgive.....
Our love.....
Our life......
Please let live.
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Old 06-25-2003, 12:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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nice and pretty very deep i liked this i wouldn't change one thing very nice
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Old 06-25-2003, 12:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanx.....more feedback appreciated
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Old 06-25-2003, 02:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Pretty good, flowed real nice and was on point. Keep it up

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