she's a kind of timeliness

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Old 06-24-2003, 03:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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she's a kind of timeliness
She appeared at the doorway however far with familiar voice
I knew who she was as soon as i heard the noise
It was the pitter patter of the saving rain
Confidence in the ruins of an ancient place
It was the mystery needed to reignite the flame

Sworn to secrecy of inner most mutinys
all that laid wake and disturbed would break
hot finger tips that made ice drip like melting fire caines
taming the tiger while fighting the bitter saint
untangled weariness from inhaling nothingness

Placing in my hands solutions to movements
bothering me and binding my attititude
Virtue in her spiralling kiss cushioned by soiltude
moving eachothers souls alone, whats more or less
my faith in her, my lowliness

Resting temples entwined in perspiration
the sun upon thy raining nation
moving clouds revealing a new creation
meditating together above all..
my benevolent revelation called.
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Old 06-24-2003, 04:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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your work always makes me smile...havent seen anythig like this from u in a while.....everything you were posting as of late was just a couple lines......liked the end the best........keep it up brit...always enjoy your work....
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Old 06-24-2003, 06:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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first time peepin' ya work...n' i'm impressed...nice drop...stay up
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Old 06-24-2003, 06:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 06-24-2003, 07:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i like this piece alot because i had to read it twice to get the meaning...(i'm kinda slow) but anyway this was tight
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Old 06-25-2003, 02:03 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice work, i wish u would post more often man

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Old 06-25-2003, 04:25 AM   #7 (permalink)
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great piece,
Sworn to secrecy of inner most mutinys
all that laid wake and disturbed would break
hot finger tips that made ice drip like melting fire caines
taming the tiger while fighting the bitter saint
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my fav lines rite there
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Old 06-26-2003, 09:53 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 06-26-2003, 02:38 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I LOVED this piece, I am impressed as well. I'm new to the forum, name's Lauren. NICE WORK.
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All I'm thinkin is true love in this piece. This makes me want to write somethin bout some love. It's been awhile since I've peeped and I regret missin other pieces. Very nice drop...peace.

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