Do You Believe Please Reply Feedback Please

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 03:12 AM

Look into your heart and tell me what you see.
Am I still on your mind; are you thinking of me?
Do you wake in the night and let out a sigh?
Do you whisper my name and wonder why?
I can't be there with you tonight;
With you in my arms, holding you tight?
Do you believe in the miracle of Love
Do you believe in you
Do you believe in Love
Do you believe it could happen to you

Take me in your arms, don't ever leave
With you in my arms, I'll make you believe!
I believe in Love, always and forever.
I believe in us, you and I together.
I can't believe Love is pain,
You have everything to lose and nothing to gain.
Tell me you believe and look into my eyes...
Do you believe... I'm not like the other guys?

Hold on tight, for I've given you my heart;
Heart and soul from the very start.
For your Love, I'll wait forever
With all my heart, I believe we'll be together.
Tell me you believe Love is bliss,
That you can believe in the magic of our first kiss.
Answer me one question, now, before I leave...
Tell me, Do You Believe?

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 03:14 AM

uppin

vinous · 06-24-2003, 03:15 AM

sounds like the lyrics to a 'pop' song, but its quite nice nonetheless

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 03:42 AM

thank you

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 03:42 AM

maybe it can be a song maybe i should record it next time thanks for the suggestion nice idea by the way

Infonation · 06-24-2003, 10:17 AM

I liked this piece very much. 1 or 2 rhyme schemes, you didn't have to force any rhyming, and it was a piece that brought my girl to mind. Liked it from beginning to end.

^One

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 08:58 PM

thank youu

iceheart · 06-24-2003, 10:28 PM

that is definitely song material, and it would be a chart toppper too. wow. i like that first verse the best, it was subtly superior to the rest, but the rest were good too

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 11:02 PM

thanks everyone

D.B. · 06-24-2003, 11:30 PM

yea dey right...sounds like a song...but still i was feelin' dat

Take me in your arms, don't ever leave
With you in my arms, I'll make you believe!
I believe in Love, always and forever.
I believe in us, you and I together.
I can't believe Love is pain,

^^fav. lines...made me think of my girl....stay up

MisterEThoughts · 06-24-2003, 11:43 PM

thanks db

Swiss Miss · 06-25-2003, 04:26 PM

I LOVED this 4 real...I think you should do your lyrics some justice by recording it. Hit me up somtime I'd love to chat

Lauren

MisterEThoughts · 06-25-2003, 05:06 PM

thanks miss uppin

MisterEThoughts · 08-10-2003, 08:17 PM

thanks all

06-24-2003, 03:12 AM	#1 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	Do You Believe Please Reply Feedback Please Look into your heart and tell me what you see. Am I still on your mind; are you thinking of me? Do you wake in the night and let out a sigh? Do you whisper my name and wonder why? I can't be there with you tonight; With you in my arms, holding you tight? Do you believe in the miracle of Love Do you believe in you Do you believe in Love Do you believe it could happen to you Take me in your arms, don't ever leave With you in my arms, I'll make you believe! I believe in Love, always and forever. I believe in us, you and I together. I can't believe Love is pain, You have everything to lose and nothing to gain. Tell me you believe and look into my eyes... Do you believe... I'm not like the other guys? Hold on tight, for I've given you my heart; Heart and soul from the very start. For your Love, I'll wait forever With all my heart, I believe we'll be together. Tell me you believe Love is bliss, That you can believe in the magic of our first kiss. Answer me one question, now, before I leave... Tell me, Do You Believe? __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 03:14 AM	#2 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	uppin __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 03:15 AM	#3 (permalink)
vinous Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: in a house Posts: 368	sounds like the lyrics to a 'pop' song, but its quite nice nonetheless __________________ just take this longing from my tongue all the lonely things these hands have done

06-24-2003, 03:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thank you __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 03:42 AM	#5 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	maybe it can be a song maybe i should record it next time thanks for the suggestion nice idea by the way __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 10:17 AM	#6 (permalink)
Infonation Info for the Nation Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: ATLANTA Posts: 1,016	I liked this piece very much. 1 or 2 rhyme schemes, you didn't have to force any rhyming, and it was a piece that brought my girl to mind. Liked it from beginning to end. ^One __________________ ".....don't give a damn if any fam recall my legacy, i'm tryin to live life in the sight of God's memory, like that y'all........"----MOS DEF

06-24-2003, 08:58 PM	#7 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thank youu __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 10:28 PM	#8 (permalink)
iceheart The Frozen Poet Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: antarctica - they sent me here citin some shit like "you are a danger to society" wtf. Posts: 692	that is definitely song material, and it would be a chart toppper too. wow. i like that first verse the best, it was subtly superior to the rest, but the rest were good too

06-24-2003, 11:02 PM	#9 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thanks everyone __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-24-2003, 11:30 PM	#10 (permalink)
D.B. Death Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: NJ Posts: 153	yea dey right...sounds like a song...but still i was feelin' dat Take me in your arms, don't ever leave With you in my arms, I'll make you believe! I believe in Love, always and forever. I believe in us, you and I together. I can't believe Love is pain, ^^fav. lines...made me think of my girl....stay up __________________ D eathblow Last edited by D.B.; 06-24-2003 at 11:31 PM.

06-24-2003, 11:43 PM	#11 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thanks db __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

06-25-2003, 04:26 PM	#12 (permalink)
Swiss Miss Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Western NC Posts: 135	I LOVED this 4 real...I think you should do your lyrics some justice by recording it. Hit me up somtime I'd love to chat Lauren

06-25-2003, 05:06 PM	#13 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thanks miss uppin __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

08-10-2003, 08:17 PM	#14 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	thanks all __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

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