The reasons for my beliefs (The Dark)

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Old 06-16-2003, 12:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The reasons for my beliefs (The Dark)

You are the reason for my beliefs
The one whose sole purpose is
To capture my soul, worthless and
I can't see beyond what he tells me
Beneath this dust, amongst the leaves i rest
Hiding from the deceased
Already, thought I, only out to cease my breath
Oh, and never I forget, he feeds on
My dependence on my faith
On my faith i hld such dependance for
Reasons beyond me at times and at times
I find it hard to speak against the
Whispers
The pure hatred found by my eyes upon them
Longing for them to understand why i
Only wish for them to only do so....

And when they ask why i love him so
And when you ask why i love him so
And when i ask why i love him so
We'll find all my answers are hidden beneath
What you fear and only that
And nothing more
You fear what, who , and why he is

And so i live, drenched in sin
But praying for deliverance
Because only a true man learns the rules
Of forgiveness
And so you ask me to turn my
Back on someone who, on his hands lies my blood?
And as it stands
The choice for me is my only and so easy....

So what shall it be?
Will i accept death not as it, but
As a stairway to a new life in which it's glory
I cannot begin to tell of

Or will i find death as a stairwell into
A world of infinite deaths
Upon infinite deaths, upon infinity and
I realize only parts of HIS designs
But i believe that if you can come to terms
With only one of his words
That will be more truth than anything
You can tell me...
So now forbid you, I do
And do proudly banish you from my mindset
A lost poet found, fond of
What lies beyond your shadows
And into his kingdom.....
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Old 06-16-2003, 07:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to the realm. Great piece. Was filled with alot of questions that need to be answered. Venting.

"So what shall it be?
Will i accept death not as it, but
As a stairway to a new life in which it's glory
I cannot begin to tell of"

That was my favorite part, keep it coming

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Old 06-17-2003, 10:38 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Deep subject, nice insight. Looking foward to some more of your pieces in this forum. ^One
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Old 06-17-2003, 11:41 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 06-17-2003, 02:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I like this...Like mind~$oul said...you were venting. nice poem. thanks for replying to mine.

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