Tap Dancing on Reality (Collabo with Feme Sole)

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Old 06-15-2003, 11:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Tap Dancing on Reality (Collabo with Feme Sole)
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Educated Feets
Tap dance on the streets
Of Reality
To imaginary drum beats,
With tattered shoes...

I'm too poor to buy a new pair,
So I throw the dice
In the game of life...
"Daddy needs some new shoes..."

Tap dancing on Reality
Singing the blues...
I'd rather pop-lock
Up the block
To a bouncy tune,
Called a Dream...





They wanted me to do ballet
but its my choice
and I want to make some noise.

I like to call it spiritual map enhancing
Tap dancing
on reality.....

I leave my mark
By being heard,
I can tell a thousand stories
Without a single word.

I reflect reality like a mirror,
but instead of just seeing
they can hear,
the truth is clear if you use your ears.

Tap dancing on reality
Showed me how to see.
I don’t just look at things now
I feel them.


And when im finished…..
I deserve that bow.
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Old 06-15-2003, 11:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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like i said, you make me look bad with this one .......really feelin your piece......its hard to do blind stuff but it was fun.....youre my new collab buddy man
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Old 06-15-2003, 11:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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If you actually look at it good...it looks like you picked up RIGHT where I left off, from a different angle...Yeah we definitely gotta do that again, cuz that was sexy how we pulled that off.
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Old 06-15-2003, 11:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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If you actually look at it good...it looks like you picked up RIGHT where I left off, from a different angle...Yeah we definitely gotta do that again, cuz that was sexy how we pulled that off.
oh goodness i didnt even notice that........thats whats up
good topic man
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Old 06-15-2003, 11:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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oh goodness i didnt even notice that........thats whats up
good topic man
I told ya...next topic's on you...don't think too hard about a topic, that's the key. First thing that pops up in your mind....I'll start it off next time.
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Old 06-16-2003, 12:32 AM   #6 (permalink)
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yo i was feeling this peace

Tap dancing on Reality
Singing the blues...
I'd rather pop-lock
Up the block
To a bouncy tune,
Called a Dream...

my favorite part....this was a great peace
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Yeah i was feelin this mos def. Both came ill. Augee you got that old school laid back stye still. Loved this. Feme your part was just flawless....

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yeh, feelin both of these, cud be mistaken as somthing written by jst one person, u really compliment eachothas styles
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Old 06-16-2003, 08:42 AM   #9 (permalink)
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AAHHHHHHHH :(

lol, jk... this was very dope indeed.. especially seeing as though feme wrote her part in under 10 minutes.. amazing
 
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AAHHHHHHHH :(

lol, jk... this was very dope indeed.. especially seeing as though feme wrote her part in under 10 minutes.. amazing
yeah i wrote it mad fast cause i didnt want him to have to wait......but after i saw his part i wished i would have taken more time lol......

thanks for the love yall [heart]
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This was good. Great collabo!!! Keep up the good work.

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Old 06-17-2003, 12:35 AM   #12 (permalink)
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yeah i wrote it mad fast cause i didnt want him to have to wait......but after i saw his part i wished i would have taken more time lol......

thanks for the love yall [heart]
You didn't need to spend more time on it...you were on point before you evwen knew it...You picked up where I left off before I even started. That in itself was ill.
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cool yall.....i liked this style and how u used dancing to tell the story...mos def original and compelling...it kept me interested and u two definetly got skills.........one love to both of u...
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A very nice collab.

Feme started it off very well. Some good imagery used and some indepth creativity shown.

Then Augee picked up where she left off very well. Carrying on in the same 'essence'.

The ending i felt maybe could've been rounded off a bit better to go with the way the whole piece was. But it's all good..

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loved it....i could hear this on an open mic stage with some drums in the background..very nice
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Damn, this was short but I was loving it, the verbal (or in this case, textual) imagery was real nice!

Maybe I should do Poetry, I can drop the hot shit without needing to do too much!

Like this Haiku right here!

I'm an alleyway emcee, old to the street
Ripped your fuckin' heart out, so I could flow to the beat
Muthafucka!

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That's not a Haiku...a Haiku is 5-7-5 syllables....but thanks for checking us out.
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Very nice... I haven't stopped by in awhile but I'm impressed that was nice flowed well and even though you two were off a lil it's ok cause you get the feel that it's from the Fella's point and the Gal's point of views. Nice work.
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That's not a Haiku...a Haiku is 5-7-5 syllables....but thanks for checking us out.
Ehh..you're..just..not reading it the way I read it!!!

Haha I knew there was a certain amount of syllables for each line, I was just too lazy to ask or try to remember....

'twas a JOKE anyways!
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