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e'S · 06-15-2003, 09:45 PM

vocalize
thought turn to streams to flow with
harmonize
brain patterns begin to function as moving cells
solemnize
eyes close only to see something other than real
summarize
is the sun in my view leaving imprints of something heavenly
randomize
old things coming to loose leafs written down then rolled up as scrolls
naturalize
totem polls of life with all the faces i have seen and un seen
popularize
something i have trouble with as i nudge my conscious and ask a question

-what is it all asking one?
well see i am me but can it be
if i am reincarnated will i be you he a whales or mastodon?
where is space laid on
-a mattress of mapless hapless out along times atlas
well who can i groove with
the giant galactuis with out touching the end of real?
-use your mouth to seal the craft that you may sail on and get in as soon as the never has left your possible jive
damn
who how when where
they hell am I?
burning like old things ive done brought up in conversation
no more walking around in circles
because ive had to many squares emerge in the future to come
solom things ponder on rings that Saturn sings
And Pluto watches
Along as i sing a song of reprogramming all teh days that have been long and iffffffffffffffff bubble
i hit form the bong with the members of eternity
processignslowly as nebula gases rising to the occasion
and moving to create new space which i must explore
-now you may see a leopard in the sea or a monkey on the moon but never a I in homie don’t play that costume!
i see so turn the light off in my room and begin the count down
1
2
3
zzzzzzzzzzzzz

e'S · 06-15-2003, 09:46 PM

just talking to my self in my almost sleep state

06-15-2003, 11:06 PM

speechless.. overally feeling mostly the todem poleness

unspoken1 · 06-16-2003, 12:33 AM

this was a very good piece...i was feeling it

vinous · 06-16-2003, 04:52 AM

really liked the way this flowed, even if at times i couldnt make out wat the significance was, it jst sounded cool.........=)

Mind~$oul · 06-16-2003, 05:01 AM

This was some creative shit man...i like the way you formatted it. Keep it up

one luv

06-16-2003, 10:18 AM

lovely, i was just saying that i think you are great.

e'S · 06-16-2003, 10:23 PM

i thank all of you for the reply
basically i talk to my self
i guess i was kinda trying to make it colliqual
to the viewers of the site

varentao · 06-18-2003, 08:34 PM

Heh. Liked how you didn't let any conventional poetic form dictate what you were doing. It was an artistic master stroke in it's own right.

As it bought forward the kind of dis-order and 'anarchy' (well kidn of) of it all to the fore...made it real apparent.

Nothing else to say, except like a lot, very very nice...

...resp...

skandelous_lala · 06-19-2003, 05:17 AM

nice stuff. glad i caught this piece! loved the vibe i got from reading this. a piece that goes to show that poets can ponder anything at all.

e'S · 06-19-2003, 09:06 PM

her you go here you go and here some for you too
thanks

varentao · 06-19-2003, 09:10 PM

^^I said i wanted SUGAR FREE, JACKASS!!

i.e. no problem...sorry, i'm going through a Russian-American phase..

e'S · 06-19-2003, 09:13 PM

i wasnt passing out candy
they were posion apples
"oh shit he's dead"
its all good stop watching old james bond movies and sound of music documentations and youll be all good
ha

varentao · 06-19-2003, 09:19 PM

Yeah, i know. Sugar free apples. You know how much natural 'fruit sugar' apples have. Too sweet for me, and me teeth...

*smiles*

i wonder what made them all black...might be all the pollution in the air. Or the powdery gum gaurd i was wearing. Oh yes, he did say something about poison...gah! I'll stick with me oil drinking theory...

Once again, nice piece e's...

06-15-2003, 09:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
e'S sdrowkcab mi kool Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: collecting dust..... Posts: 515	no title'S vocalize thought turn to streams to flow with harmonize brain patterns begin to function as moving cells solemnize eyes close only to see something other than real summarize is the sun in my view leaving imprints of something heavenly randomize old things coming to loose leafs written down then rolled up as scrolls naturalize totem polls of life with all the faces i have seen and un seen popularize something i have trouble with as i nudge my conscious and ask a question -what is it all asking one? well see i am me but can it be if i am reincarnated will i be you he a whales or mastodon? where is space laid on -a mattress of mapless hapless out along times atlas well who can i groove with the giant galactuis with out touching the end of real? -use your mouth to seal the craft that you may sail on and get in as soon as the never has left your possible jive damn who how when where they hell am I? burning like old things ive done brought up in conversation no more walking around in circles because ive had to many squares emerge in the future to come solom things ponder on rings that Saturn sings And Pluto watches Along as i sing a song of reprogramming all teh days that have been long and iffffffffffffffff bubble i hit form the bong with the members of eternity processignslowly as nebula gases rising to the occasion and moving to create new space which i must explore -now you may see a leopard in the sea or a monkey on the moon but never a I in homie don’t play that costume! i see so turn the light off in my room and begin the count down 1 2 3 zzzzzzzzzzzzz

06-16-2003, 12:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
unspoken1 Revolutionary Wordsmen Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: beyond the depths of pain Posts: 758	this was a very good piece...i was feeling it __________________ Overlooked noise.......stay tuned in

06-16-2003, 04:52 AM	#5 (permalink)
vinous Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: in a house Posts: 368	really liked the way this flowed, even if at times i couldnt make out wat the significance was, it jst sounded cool.........=) __________________ just take this longing from my tongue all the lonely things these hands have done

06-16-2003, 05:01 AM	#6 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	This was some creative shit man...i like the way you formatted it. Keep it up one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

06-19-2003, 05:17 AM	#10 (permalink)
skandelous_lala back from the dead Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Hey! Fuck you and the horse you rode in on! Posts: 26,707	nice stuff. glad i caught this piece! loved the vibe i got from reading this. a piece that goes to show that poets can ponder anything at all. __________________ ALL YOU REALLY KNOW IS WHAT I CHOOSE TO SHOW Good Mourning, Good afternoon, Good nite, what have you done with your life?. Everybody's time comes to be embraced by the light you only afraid to die when you ain't livin right

06-15-2003, 09:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
e'S sdrowkcab mi kool Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: collecting dust..... Posts: 515	just talking to my self in my almost sleep state

06-15-2003, 11:06 PM	#3 (permalink)
Lyme Guest Posts: n/a	speechless.. overally feeling mostly the todem poleness

06-16-2003, 10:18 AM	#7 (permalink)
iconoclast Guest Posts: n/a	lovely, i was just saying that i think you are great.

06-16-2003, 10:23 PM	#8 (permalink)
e'S sdrowkcab mi kool Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: collecting dust..... Posts: 515	i thank all of you for the reply basically i talk to my self i guess i was kinda trying to make it colliqual to the viewers of the site

06-18-2003, 08:34 PM	#9 (permalink)
varentao Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 765	Heh. Liked how you didn't let any conventional poetic form dictate what you were doing. It was an artistic master stroke in it's own right. As it bought forward the kind of dis-order and 'anarchy' (well kidn of) of it all to the fore...made it real apparent. Nothing else to say, except like a lot, very very nice... ...resp...

06-19-2003, 09:06 PM	#11 (permalink)
e'S sdrowkcab mi kool Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: collecting dust..... Posts: 515	her you go here you go and here some for you too thanks

06-19-2003, 09:10 PM	#12 (permalink)
varentao Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 765	^^I said i wanted SUGAR FREE, JACKASS!! i.e. no problem...sorry, i'm going through a Russian-American phase..

06-19-2003, 09:13 PM	#13 (permalink)
e'S sdrowkcab mi kool Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: collecting dust..... Posts: 515	i wasnt passing out candy they were posion apples "oh shit he's dead" its all good stop watching old james bond movies and sound of music documentations and youll be all good ha

06-19-2003, 09:19 PM	#14 (permalink)
varentao Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 765	Yeah, i know. Sugar free apples. You know how much natural 'fruit sugar' apples have. Too sweet for me, and me teeth... smiles i wonder what made them all black...might be all the pollution in the air. Or the powdery gum gaurd i was wearing. Oh yes, he did say something about poison...gah! I'll stick with me oil drinking theory... Once again, nice piece e's...

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