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Old 06-15-2003, 07:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Why do you look so discontented?
Am I not what you expected?
Am I too short, too tall,
too big, too small?

I Apologize

Am I too blunt and outspoken?
because my spirits aren't broken.
Am I too loud, adn proud,
too weird, too feared?

I Apologize.

I'm sorry you were born without
a mind large enough to comprehend
the tangiblility of this world.
I'm sorry you have to hide behind
your wall of fabrications.
but most of all, I'm sorry
I have to walk this Earth
full of closed minds and opened hands.
This world, lessened by the misconceptions
of the weak, confused, and descepted
that wander this plane of existence
searching for acceptance.

I Apologize.
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Old 06-15-2003, 09:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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woah i LOVED this.......(i dont say that often).........it sort of had a maya angelou feel to it.....

but most of all, I'm sorry
I have to walk this Earth
full of closed minds and opened hands.
^^^
dope line


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Old 06-15-2003, 11:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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All I can say is I'm sorry for sleeping on this, for reason unknown...I give it 2 snaps.
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Old 06-16-2003, 04:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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vinous takes it up the butt!
yeh, really liked this, nice twist, strong
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Old 06-17-2003, 08:21 PM   #5 (permalink)
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yo thanks for the look out ppl

STAY up and much LOVE peace!
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So I'd prefer to be remembered as a smiling face
Not this fucking wreck
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Old 06-17-2003, 10:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I'm sorry you were born without
a mind large enough to comprehend
the tangiblility of this world.


dope....liked those lines....ima have to start checkin for you....
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Old 06-18-2003, 09:04 PM   #7 (permalink)
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varentao takes it up the butt!
Very nice...

..depicting how shallow and flakey (amongst other things) this world can be (and in general, is)...in a very simplistic yet so well put way...

...er...nothing more to say...(?!?>!)...yep, that said it all for me..

...resp...
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Old 06-19-2003, 05:14 AM   #8 (permalink)
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nice! i really liked the message in this
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Old 06-19-2003, 10:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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i'm glad i stumbled upon this piece... i've always wanted to write a poem like this and u did the idea justic. nice job.
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