oOWhen I Close My EyesOo

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Old 06-15-2003, 10:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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oOWhen I Close My EyesOo
When I close my eyes I can know
What it is to feel lust
The touch of another - bare skin against skin
The smell of musky desire
Taste the sweat brought forth from passion
Pull my hair - tame me
Savor my nectar
and relish in sensuality with me
Look into my eyes at the moment
When you feel intensity crashing upon you
See my anguish and understand my craving
As no other could
Feed me on your desires and nourish me
With your love
Hold me in arms protecting and warm
Then bath me in scented water
And cleanse my soul and
Make it pure again
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Old 06-15-2003, 10:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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nice piece... full of imagery, you painted the picture in my mind... great job.
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Old 06-15-2003, 07:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I liked this...this came across really sensual...Left a little to the imagination. Nice.
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Old 06-16-2003, 12:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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this poem was filled with beautiful imagery. Keep it coming

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Old 06-16-2003, 10:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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This was beautiful. I was feeling this piece from the begging till the end. Good piece keep it up!!! I'll be looking for more.

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Old 06-17-2003, 10:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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your so good...i will never understand why u didnt wanna post your stuff.....Pull my hair - tame me
Savor my nectar

liked that....love reading your work...keep it up
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i dont think i have seen any of ur pieces yet , but this one was very nice with broad imagery....keep writing and welcome to the board...


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nice...great imagery...sourta dirty but sweet at the same time hehehe i like it.
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