Untitled, just some keystyle rambling...damn sadness...

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Old 06-15-2003, 06:38 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Untitled, just some keystyle rambling...damn sadness...
As chance meetings become
last minute inspirations
my past finished its duration
by running through to my present
I'm presently parked past the meters limit
in an emotional tow zone
tickets building a shield to alleviate
the heat I'll feel when I step into the furnace
ignition turned like hot coals as I
fed fuel to the fire with my
lead foot on the pedal, I drive
figure eights where words meddle, my mind
hits the brakes and shifts the gears
skipping through this
transition like slipping transmissions
hydroplaning over lost loves puddles as
wipers streak the tear drops
drizzling upon metallic flesh and asphalt
and I pass fault like outstretched thumbs
stepping the miracle mile with
soul worn through soles showing
vagabonds who gather arms in
tattered shards and straggle on by while
my inner self waves in the rear view
as men become mice in an instant
but my indifference invites a grimmace
so I drive long after my drive has ended.
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Old 06-15-2003, 08:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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damn this was so good, especially for a keystyle......nice little rhythm, flow, good lines, content good......i was feeling the whole thing but it really picked up towards the middle for me.......props
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Old 06-15-2003, 09:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I HATE WHEN PEOPLE DONT TITLE THEIR WORK.....

lol..your lucky i like your work...

this was dope..especially for a keystyle...my keystyles are never this nice...keep bringing it judge
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Old 06-15-2003, 09:18 AM   #4 (permalink)
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vinous takes it up the butt!
transition like slipping transmissions
hydroplaning over lost loves puddles as
wipers streak the tear drops
drizzling upon metallic flesh and asphalt
and I pass fault like outstretched thumbs
stepping the miracle mile with
soul worn through soles showing
vagabonds who gather arms in
tattered shards and straggle on by while
my inner self waves in the rear view
as men become mice in an instant
but my indifference invites a grimmace
so I drive long after my drive has ended.

loved this especially
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Old 06-15-2003, 06:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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*GeMiNeYeZ* takes it up the butt!
i tell you, sadness and depression always create the best poetry. this is no exception... this was a great keystyle, one of the best i've seen in a while...
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Old 06-16-2003, 12:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Ill ass keystyle, i'm tired of you postin something then disappear for 242343243 days and come back with something. Stay ya ass put. Great work, flowed well and you use ya words perfect

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Hey jugggiiiieeeeee
Where u been? I haven't seen u in a while. Good job. Words are good and it flows very well.
Be looking for more.

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Old 06-18-2003, 05:09 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Sun_Flower takes it up the butt!
I enjoy the drive of this keystyle as your gears keep shifting I say your mind is still ponding. So keep writting I miss reading your pieces.
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peel off into the rain. nice. up!
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Old 07-04-2003, 10:13 PM   #10 (permalink)
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iceheart takes it up the butt!
if saying a freestyle out loud is called "freestlye" and typing the freestyle up is called "keystyle" then is writing a freestyle called "penstyle"?

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