collab i did with my little buddy

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Old 06-14-2003, 09:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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collab i did with my little buddy

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I know sometimes im mean to you
but between us two
i only want whats best for you......
when im in a bad mood
i can be mad rude takin my stress out on you
and thats the truth.....
youve been down from the first time we talked
got you to stop talkin bout the syrup and glocks.....
you let me cry in your ear
its been almost a year,
if you only knew how i cry cause i wanna be near you help get your head clear and make you get through.......
youll be alright i know ya will
not cause your skill
but because youre smart,
have a big heart
just gotta find your part......
youre doin better in school now thats a good start.......
youve made me proud even though i dont say it enough sometimes i gotta act tough but its all love
i only do it cause i care bout you
just know ill always be here for you



And I appreciate it my unrelated sister, so many tears and tissue, sometimes I really miss you…thanks to you ive upgraded my mindstate, no longer tryin to increase an already high crimerate, started to take select falls and receive collect calls but declined fate and all charges, sometimes I still act retarded but I dropped the Nyquil, started fightin with intellect and a little might still, chose to leave my mic right here til I finish high school no longer a high fool, you helped me realize what ive known for the longest, life's cruel, and television and radio aint dope man, nothing glamorous about the dopeman, expand my vocab and make the flows worth more, while you help me with homework and relationship troubles and I attempt to escape this rubble…we call Earth


Glad i helped you see your worth
and made you realize Knowlege is power
and a Real man defies the street and its real lies
turns down the dope and goes after the highest prize,
one that nobody can take away
that way they cant sway your mind and mold you like clay......
You learned fast to go after what lasts
dont follow the masses and get to your classes.......
dont know exactly what i said to make you change your ways but im grateful everyday
and i gotta say youve made me proud
no more out clubbin and gettin wild
startin fights with the crowd.......Im not trying to mold
you, i feel bad when i scold you
but its the best thing i can do when i cant hold you........
sometimes i come off as a bitch
but im just lookin out and tryna help you get rich (in the mind) put the krazy shit behind cause when i met you i recognized your kind



Wanna rewind time and relive the good times fuck gangsta, cause the hood life will leave you shook like Suge Knight when the bullet went through the car window, still club occasionally but no longer flip tho, on the masses, my mind's relaxin, tryna go forward to the end yo cause I realized I was goin backwards like Momento, takin times to hit the books is how I choose to live life, to quote Talib "life without knowledge is death in disguise"…you helped me love things, we can discuss things, like how certain grrls wild, im the boroughs child, no such thing as pain mild it's the real hardcore, we what this world that's harsh bore, I now know I don't need nice things, fuck punches and rhyme schemes, its hard to explain but its plausible, I think I was put on this planet to help you in anyway possible…to get through whatever pain
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Old 06-14-2003, 09:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Amazing. Very good chemistry between the two of you.. I wish ours was that good. Nice little open mic from your buddy, and you are just flossing the skill that everyone knows you have. good job people.
 
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Old 06-14-2003, 09:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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hell yeah!

this shit is blazin......u 2 worked very well togehter...one of the best collabs i've seen on this board......makes me wanna do one...

keep bringing it feme sole
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Old 06-14-2003, 05:46 PM   #4 (permalink)
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great work on both parts, chemistry was good.

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Old 06-14-2003, 08:30 PM   #5 (permalink)
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That shit was tight...I think you 2 should do another one together.
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Old 06-15-2003, 04:45 AM   #6 (permalink)
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This was a very positive piece.
Great collab. You complimented each other well.
Keep it u. Upping this piece right here.

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