Love For Mahogany

mumblez · 06-14-2003, 05:55 AM

Some words to go by when reading:
I know it is not a sin for loving another woman, if you are not her race. In today's societ, it seems almost 'normal' but then at times to me it doesn't. Just read this and try to be open-minded to an extent.

-- Poem --

As I put my head down
Close my eyes and put my hands together
I begin to think and wonder why I cry
I begin to pray
'dear lord can you tell me if its a sin
for loving someone with a different color skin
someone that you feel you will be with forever until the end'

I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

Its the love of a mahogany female that
i really adore
the love a mahogany female is what i look for

i begin to pray again
'dear lord i have not heard your reply
please do not tell me the way i feel
is not right..
to be with a beautiful girl with mahagony
skin, not only beautiful on the outside,
but beautiful on the in'

And in that moment, I had sign,
the tears that were coming down my face,
were now dry. for the lord has come
and dried my tears, no more for i thought
i have sinned, for loving a woman with
mahogany skin.

as you can tell, im the opposite of black
not the color of night
for i am white

06-14-2003, 07:13 AM

holy crap this is amazing. real good work, i enjoyed it very much.
good visualizations, and i liked the rhyme scheme alot. Very nice, I look forward to further stuff from you

vinous · 06-14-2003, 07:16 AM

for the lord has come
and dried my tears, no more for i thought
i have sinned, for loving a woman with
mahogany skin.

like that part rite there; feel wat ur sayin wen u say it feels normal sometimes and at times it doesnt, u dont notice it until ur the one bein noticed, or somehtin like that, anyways, i feel wat ur sayin.

mumblez · 06-14-2003, 08:54 AM

ay much thanks ppl. keep uppin

-1

lpoet · 06-14-2003, 09:35 AM

back with the old eminem avy and all...lol

this shit is hot!

why u be dissapearing and shit like u do?

....I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

dont think those were your best lines..but i can most def relate to them...great drop

skandelous_lala · 06-14-2003, 09:38 AM

i feel the message..i like the way it was written...not something i could really rave about..but all the same it was decent and your message was on point. keep it up.

mumblez · 06-14-2003, 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by lpoet
back with the old eminem avy and all...lol

this shit is hot!

why u be dissapearing and shit like u do?

....I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

dont think those were your best lines..but i can most def relate to them...great drop

Yup, I'm back. I be busy sometimes and jus forget all about it. I've actually dropped this peice before on this site, I *think* lol. I'm not harry houdini, wutchu mean how I be disappearin lol j/k

Thanks I appreciate all of your replies so far, uppin

Uno

Deathblow · 06-14-2003, 04:28 PM

damn dat was nice...good message n' emotion..keep it up

Mind~$oul · 06-14-2003, 05:59 PM

Strong piece, shit had me into from the very fast line. Keep it up

one luv

06-14-2003, 05:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
mumblez Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 131	Love For Mahogany Some words to go by when reading: I know it is not a sin for loving another woman, if you are not her race. In today's societ, it seems almost 'normal' but then at times to me it doesn't. Just read this and try to be open-minded to an extent. -- Poem -- As I put my head down Close my eyes and put my hands together I begin to think and wonder why I cry I begin to pray 'dear lord can you tell me if its a sin for loving someone with a different color skin someone that you feel you will be with forever until the end' I begin to think about what I said Wondering why people say We shouldnt be together Its the only thing I really know Its the love of a mahogany female that i really adore the love a mahogany female is what i look for i begin to pray again 'dear lord i have not heard your reply please do not tell me the way i feel is not right.. to be with a beautiful girl with mahagony skin, not only beautiful on the outside, but beautiful on the in' And in that moment, I had sign, the tears that were coming down my face, were now dry. for the lord has come and dried my tears, no more for i thought i have sinned, for loving a woman with mahogany skin. as you can tell, im the opposite of black not the color of night for i am white

06-14-2003, 07:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
vinous Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: in a house Posts: 368	for the lord has come and dried my tears, no more for i thought i have sinned, for loving a woman with mahogany skin. like that part rite there; feel wat ur sayin wen u say it feels normal sometimes and at times it doesnt, u dont notice it until ur the one bein noticed, or somehtin like that, anyways, i feel wat ur sayin. __________________ just take this longing from my tongue all the lonely things these hands have done

06-14-2003, 09:35 AM	#5 (permalink)
lpoet POET Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Indianapolis, IN Posts: 12,672	back with the old eminem avy and all...lol this shit is hot! why u be dissapearing and shit like u do? ....I begin to think about what I said Wondering why people say We shouldnt be together Its the only thing I really know dont think those were your best lines..but i can most def relate to them...great drop __________________ "SHE CAME BACK TO ME AND I PRAY SHE STAYS" --lpoet

06-14-2003, 09:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
skandelous_lala back from the dead Join Date: Sep 2000 Location: Hey! Fuck you and the horse you rode in on! Posts: 26,707	i feel the message..i like the way it was written...not something i could really rave about..but all the same it was decent and your message was on point. keep it up. __________________ ALL YOU REALLY KNOW IS WHAT I CHOOSE TO SHOW Good Mourning, Good afternoon, Good nite, what have you done with your life?. Everybody's time comes to be embraced by the light you only afraid to die when you ain't livin right

06-14-2003, 05:59 PM	#9 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	Strong piece, shit had me into from the very fast line. Keep it up one luv __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

06-14-2003, 07:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
iconoclast Guest Posts: n/a	holy crap this is amazing. real good work, i enjoyed it very much. good visualizations, and i liked the rhyme scheme alot. Very nice, I look forward to further stuff from you

06-14-2003, 08:54 AM	#4 (permalink)
mumblez Registered User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 131	ay much thanks ppl. keep uppin -1

06-14-2003, 04:28 PM	#8 (permalink)
Deathblow its a G thang Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: NJ Posts: 832	damn dat was nice...good message n' emotion..keep it up

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