Love For Mahogany

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Old 06-14-2003, 05:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Love For Mahogany

Some words to go by when reading:
I know it is not a sin for loving another woman, if you are not her race. In today's societ, it seems almost 'normal' but then at times to me it doesn't. Just read this and try to be open-minded to an extent.

-- Poem --

As I put my head down
Close my eyes and put my hands together
I begin to think and wonder why I cry
I begin to pray
'dear lord can you tell me if its a sin
for loving someone with a different color skin
someone that you feel you will be with forever until the end'

I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

Its the love of a mahogany female that
i really adore
the love a mahogany female is what i look for

i begin to pray again
'dear lord i have not heard your reply
please do not tell me the way i feel
is not right..
to be with a beautiful girl with mahagony
skin, not only beautiful on the outside,
but beautiful on the in'

And in that moment, I had sign,
the tears that were coming down my face,
were now dry. for the lord has come
and dried my tears, no more for i thought
i have sinned, for loving a woman with
mahogany skin.


as you can tell, im the opposite of black
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Old 06-14-2003, 07:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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holy crap this is amazing. real good work, i enjoyed it very much.
good visualizations, and i liked the rhyme scheme alot. Very nice, I look forward to further stuff from you
 
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Old 06-14-2003, 07:16 AM   #3 (permalink)
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for the lord has come
and dried my tears, no more for i thought
i have sinned, for loving a woman with
mahogany skin.

like that part rite there; feel wat ur sayin wen u say it feels normal sometimes and at times it doesnt, u dont notice it until ur the one bein noticed, or somehtin like that, anyways, i feel wat ur sayin.
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back with the old eminem avy and all...lol

this shit is hot!

why u be dissapearing and shit like u do?

....I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

dont think those were your best lines..but i can most def relate to them...great drop
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i feel the message..i like the way it was written...not something i could really rave about..but all the same it was decent and your message was on point. keep it up.
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back with the old eminem avy and all...lol

this shit is hot!

why u be dissapearing and shit like u do?

....I begin to think about what I said
Wondering why people say
We shouldnt be together
Its the only thing I really know

dont think those were your best lines..but i can most def relate to them...great drop
Yup, I'm back. I be busy sometimes and jus forget all about it. I've actually dropped this peice before on this site, I *think* lol. I'm not harry houdini, wutchu mean how I be disappearin lol j/k

Thanks I appreciate all of your replies so far, uppin

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damn dat was nice...good message n' emotion..keep it up
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Strong piece, shit had me into from the very fast line. Keep it up

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