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Old 06-14-2003, 04:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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here and now
here and now
in my own mind
i know what it is that i think...
these thoughts be the death of me.
i think, and there for i am...
insain.
she use to love me.
she use to love me.
she use to...
here and
now, we drink down
gallons of clear spirits
and these spirits now
dictate my here and now.
now... is all that we have.
yet we waist our nows
by dwelling on the use to be's
that themselves dwell in the
here and
the now.
in my mind...
i know...
and if ignorantce is bliss,
my Heaven has become
a living hell...
there is nothing left for me o do...
but end it all...
here
and
now...

*gunshot*

forgive me my Love
for i know what i have done.

*gunshot*
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Old 06-14-2003, 05:37 AM   #2 (permalink)
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damn man...this shit reminded me of undying love by nas at the end....Nice shit sizzla, nice keystyle i know it was a keystyle lol

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Old 06-14-2003, 07:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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damn man...this shit reminded me of undying love by nas at the end....Nice shit sizzla, nice keystyle i know it was a keystyle lol

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remind me not to get drunk the next time i lose the one i love.
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Old 06-14-2003, 08:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Different approach to this piece with a redundant use of the title, which added a little more flavor to it, added more of the meaning. To tell you that the title means something in this piece you're writing about.. Um, I found this to be short, yet powerful at it's own rate. I also thought that your poetic devices in this could've been better, yet what you had kept a hidden meaning throughout this piece. Other than that, Nice work. My blessings..
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Old 06-14-2003, 08:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Man that shit was dope...I'm just wondering where the hell you shot yourself the 1st time, where you can say all that before you shoot yourself again. lol I like the melodrama in this joint though.
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Man that shit was dope...I'm just wondering where the hell you shot yourself the 1st time, where you can say all that before you shoot yourself again. lol I like the melodrama in this joint though.


umm, I THINK that he shot the girl he lost... then himself... but I'm not completely sure
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This was a good piece. Nice Job! Keepit up.
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Old 06-15-2003, 09:00 AM   #9 (permalink)
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shits dope...was kinda like that nas joint....wish this had more 2 it though...but like i said...still dope...always enjoy your work...UP
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