Poetry and Confusion: Deities.

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Old 06-14-2003, 02:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Poetry and Confusion: Deities.

Confusion runs through the mind over and over,
Spinning until my thoughts face backward,
My senses turned top side under,
Then thrown back around.
Confusion is ceased only by seranading music.
Music that would send a quiver up the leg,
Through the spine,
Relaxing the pain, making it temporarily dormant,
Pulsating aches are diminished by the slow smooth bass,
Sharp stabbing pain behind the throat is gone,
Overrun by the mortal voices entering my mind,
Their poetry translates into mine,
Mine into theirs, as they are written at unison.
The world is moved into a single diety.
No choices just one task,
One action,
To write to their poetries.
Their lyrics move into my head,
Softly burning away fears, and tensing fingers,
Eagerly moving my fingers into motion.
The song ends and there is silence again.
Utter terror once more,
The lyrics stop,
The pain returns into my temples,
Into my throat,
Into my body,
The walls are breached I had built,
Then choices return,
Finally confusion sets in.
I awake to find only this....
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Old 06-14-2003, 02:44 AM   #2 (permalink)
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"Confusion runs through the mind over and over,
Spinning until my thoughts face backward,
My senses turned top side under,
Then thrown back around.
Confusion is ceased only by seranading music.
Music that would send a quiver up the leg,
Through the spine,
Relaxing the pain, making it temporarily dormant,
Pulsating aches are diminished by the slow smooth bass,
Sharp stabbing pain behind the throat is gone,
Overrun by the mortal voices entering my mind,
Their poetry translates into mine,
Mine into theirs, as they are written at unison"

damn you painted the picture perfect with them words. 110% imagery.

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The lyrics stop,
The pain returns into my temples,
Into my throat,
Into my body,
The walls are breached I had built,
Then choices return,
Finally confusion sets in.
I awake to find only this....

really like this here, niceness.
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Old 06-14-2003, 09:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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love your style of writting.....would love to do a collab with you some time.......

My senses turned top side under,
Then thrown back around.

fav line...but there were so many other great ones

*heads to your other piece*
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Confusion is ceased only by seranading music.
Music that would send a quiver up the leg,
Through the spine,
Relaxing the pain, making it temporarily dormant,
Pulsating aches are diminished by the slow smooth bass,
-
Overrun by the mortal voices entering my mind,
-
The world is moved into a single diety.

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Their lyrics move into my head,
Softly burning away fears, and tensing fingers,
Eagerly moving my fingers into motion.
The song ends and there is silence again.
Utter terror once more,
-
The walls are breached I had built,
Then choices return,
Finally confusion sets in.
I awake to find only this....
i really like this , very strong and smooth ^
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Old 06-14-2003, 09:41 AM   #6 (permalink)
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really nice...i think i may have took your meaning different than you originally intended it..but i liked the vibe i got from this, nice
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