think you can catch me?

[e'S]

yes yes
telling a lie as i stand
can i sit down rise to the ocasion
no i can not
becuase my thought got caught
in someoneelses perspective
due to my elcetive suggestings
prounounatomy becomes sound of those used by diggty das
with out hemriging

sort of confrontational with out to much idea produced
leaves me to sound subtle
but glance upsidedown throught this miscontorted tunnel
i see righttoeusly
in places of nasty thought
and you thought i might be caught in a lie while im still standing
feet can not macth me since the nikes make me move ambigyouasslee
to fit beside me
no i got a river of moronic streams paused and switch like channels of infomercials with little trinkets like somes
mind patterns
pazleys dont faze me but if its flannel ill have to glance
4 stripes
walmart ants running around
im out fuck that

[e'S]

man dont even ask its just is what it says it is
no explination on this one but you should get the pronos

[Mind~$oul]

this was different, very abstract. I had to read it a few times to get the feel to it. Sorry for being so slow. Keep it up

one luv

[e'S]

so you could get the whole it doesnt matter what the hell people percieve your words as or just your actions?

[TuNed RooT]

"yes yes
telling a lie as i stand
can i sit down rise to the ocasion
no i can not
becuase my thought got caught"

I somewhat caught the whole true meaning to this, as you said in your last post. Doesn't matter what people percieve of your actions, nor words. It doesn't matter if they 'catch you' at times, just if you 'catch yourself' and if you know what yourself is talking about, that's what I got from the 'meaning'. Anyway, the meaning was creative, I must say, because it just had a some truth and knowledge to it. That attracts me to the Poetry that I'm reading. Anyway, overall, I found this a very delicate put together piece, use more Imagery, so we can paint a better picture of the scenerio. It'd make your piece more powerful, although maybe you had just focused on what you needed to say, then focused on what happened around that setting, in that surrounding, whichever. Good work, family. My blessings..

[Mind~$oul]

Originally posted by e'S
so you could get the whole it doesnt matter what the hell people percieve your words as or just your actions?

whoa buddy calm down there, i was just simply saying it took me a minute to get it. Like tuned said as long as u know what u talkin about, that's what matters

one luv

[e'S]

whoa is for black rob and puffy
no ones getting up quick over here

you know I can catch you.. if you dont then you really should

[lpoet]

lil different than your usual work

but like always i dig it......

becuase my thought got caught
in someoneelses perspective

dope lines

keep doing ya thang

[augee.ali]

Definitely an abstract joint...A little all over the place with your thoughts, but fuck it..It's whatever you meant it to be. I think it's good for everybody to get off like that once in a while.