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Old 08-29-2007, 11:07 PM   #21 (permalink)
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(i'm not the one that upped it)
post some new stuff though hun =)
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Old 08-30-2007, 02:16 PM   #22 (permalink)
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WOW!!!!! That was truly awesome. It flowed so well. Like one of those pieces you read faster and faster and get really upset when its over. Awesome.
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Old 09-01-2007, 12:33 AM   #23 (permalink)
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What the hell? Yo, this was a keystyle from four years ago! I literally don't remember writing it, and can about guess that I was on something. Benadryl or what have you...

I haven't written poems lately, just songs. Lot and lots and lots of songs.

Like the one in my sig.

I'll try to get back to the poetry, tho.
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Old 09-02-2007, 12:18 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Great poem, man. I especially felt this part:

"Try
Not to deny
The reality of dreams
Reality of screams
Reality of scenes
I see that reality
And that reality is me
Frightfully crying
The insanity
Is prying
Through the thousands of eyes
We perceive"


Every time I read through it I get goose bumps. It's been a while since I wrote any poems, though I've been reading quite a few. This just brought the urge to write back. Thanks for the inspiration.
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Old 09-08-2007, 12:14 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Wow. This was perfect. One of the best poems I've read in a long long time. Tight shit with an incredible gift.

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