Loser

[allnakey]

Haven't been here in a while. This is not like anything I ever posted on here before. It's kind of humorous and it reminds me of everyday life a lot.


The tide turns and someday I just feel stupid


Like…
Sitting on a street bench getting laughed at
By some guy named Chad with a soul patch
He’s such a jackass, Nah let me retract that

I’m just jealous.

Or…
I lack confidence, or common sense
Ever since I respond in mutters
My brain huddles in it’s own corner

So thoughtless.

Serious…
Maybe just delirious to an extent
Out of tune, I’ll just auto tune
Sound popular, maybe get a tatoo too

Now I’m Kanye West

Effortless…
I’m on top of this, no stopping it
Dropped out of school, still no knowledge
But I’m so damn hood rich

Unemployment checks.

Relative…
Still definitively obvious but predominate
I got swag, isn’t that relevant?
Tried so hard, but still so mad

I almost forgot.

Fuck Chad!

[CrowdAds]

[Coup d'état]

I'm liking the pace of this, it guides along. Maybe chad is content in his mediocre mindset...you just be comfortable playing your own deck...screw the house, but it does always win.

Great piece, deff. drop some more work bro

[Chavvah]

Yo!! This was so relative!!! As we all try to find our own identity we get lost in everyone else's at times. This "where am I" more so than "who am I" question throughout the whole piece was a great way to explore the thought process of us being so ridiculous sometimes. I loved it!!

[jesuit223]

tee hee I can realate...

[MissAndrya]

That was entertaining, and a fun way to think about who we 'are in any given day or moment. What we do, what we believe we can accomplish changes daily, a piece I think many can relate to.

[jesuit223]

This was even better the second time I read it. One of those poems that grows with you as you are reading it ;)

[SAMARA]

lol

you need to stop drinking that moonshine.