the road

organized_locus · 02-09-2008, 08:05 PM

the road

my long lonely destination has come to an end

I’ve abandoned all my lovers and destroyed all my friends

I main line the sediment look into her eyes and pretend

she digs her nails deep into my back and lets the scars show

she says she loves me and I say... I know

then she clutches her legs around my waist and accepts my final blow

she looks into the heavens and thanks god himself

I smile and know the praise is good for his health

she gets up to leave bites my lip until it bleeds

licks away the truth and gives me all I need

I place my blade deep into her thigh

she falls to the floor and exits way before she could cry

I no longer wonder if my deeds hold any weight

for I pave the road to hell with angels and fate

--Z.Silas Herrera

C.Jacc · 02-12-2008, 07:42 PM

"blade deep in her thigh" .. i like it.. inspirational..

SIZZLA · 02-13-2008, 02:23 AM

i dug this joint, i almost slept on it... glad i didnt, it was perfect in lenth, the flow was madd nice, rhymed jus enough, i mean, it was complexed enough to keep it real ye know so, i say nice drop sun...

ChanteBaba · 03-02-2008, 04:18 PM

WOW THIS WAS SICKKKKKKKKKKK!!!

goosebumps

good shit man!

02-09-2008, 08:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
organized_locus Repent & Represent Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Oakland Posts: 39	the road the road my long lonely destination has come to an end I’ve abandoned all my lovers and destroyed all my friends I main line the sediment look into her eyes and pretend she digs her nails deep into my back and lets the scars show she says she loves me and I say... I know then she clutches her legs around my waist and accepts my final blow she looks into the heavens and thanks god himself I smile and know the praise is good for his health she gets up to leave bites my lip until it bleeds licks away the truth and gives me all I need I place my blade deep into her thigh she falls to the floor and exits way before she could cry I no longer wonder if my deeds hold any weight for I pave the road to hell with angels and fate --Z.Silas Herrera __________________ "real motherfuckas better recognize real or ill motherfuckas going to exercise skill"

02-13-2008, 02:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
SIZZLA Registered User Join Date: Dec 1999 Location: The New Heaven Posts: 7,690	i dug this joint, i almost slept on it... glad i didnt, it was perfect in lenth, the flow was madd nice, rhymed jus enough, i mean, it was complexed enough to keep it real ye know so, i say nice drop sun... __________________ Thus saith the Lord...

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02-12-2008, 07:42 PM	#2 (permalink)
C.Jacc Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 11	"blade deep in her thigh" .. i like it.. inspirational..

03-02-2008, 04:18 PM	#4 (permalink)
ChanteBaba Registered Shmoozer Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 36	WOW THIS WAS SICKKKKKKKKKKK!!! goosebumps good shit man!

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