Langston, I too, sing America

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Old 02-05-2008, 02:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Langston, I too, sing America

abject poverty

was an issue read about in Time magazine

in a third world country that seemed so far

away so long ago

but today I feel those wretched words are

close to me

abject poverty

They rest upon my back a weight that I was not

prepared to bare

Tears I shed I keep in an old jelly jar because something

is telling me soon I will not be able to cry no more

soon I will not be able to feel no more

soon I will be no more

As my soul becomes bankrupt

My spirit hangs her head in despair

As I decide food for my children or a roof over our heads

I wonder if Langston would still write

"I too, sing America"

cause trying to sing america is rough on me

I too, sing America does not include the American dream

America tells me I should be ashamed of comparing my

life to those in a third world country

When I live in the richest land...

Yet the looks on my children's faces from hunger

tells me I've been dealt the same hand

So I cry I too, sing america so why have they left me behind

rise for work

put in my time

end my day

still on the grind

hustling to put clothes on my children's backs

So I write I too, sing America can't you see or

have I become faceless just another victim of poverty

America what am I too you

Do you even care

I do

because I too,

am America
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Old 02-11-2008, 03:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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With the current economic state of this country... I think everyone can feel this.

Man...its been a minute since I've been in here...

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very well written.. like the picture u paint reflecting poverty as individual instead of congregated .. thank u
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Old 02-14-2008, 01:11 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you all for the feed back... it is much appreciated... yes our economy really sucks right now....
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We can definitely feel a change in the economy with trillions and trillions of money lost in the war and the rising inflation of prices
I just see a huge fall of economic status in our future a good possibility because all those years putting the war so high on the list of its priorities led by Bush i think will have a strong impact with the aftermath of putting the country in such huge debt...
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thanks for all the love and the great comments... yes the economy is very bad right now....
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deep and gritty feeling in this piece. I was diggin it. very heroic.
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