How I Brought the Pain

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Old 02-02-2008, 04:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
last night in my body
 
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How I Brought the Pain

Baby
Maybe
You should
Try a lil harder be a lil smarter
Work for more than fame
I bring the
I bring the
I bring the pain.
I'm crazy about you
But
You just think I'm insane
I bring the
I bring the
I bring the pain.
My days are used to be full of social success
If I never met you
My days would suck-less
I bring the
I bring the
I bring the pain.

The whistle
On the pot blew
The kettle
But only the stove knows
Watch as my nose grows
I'm lying down now
Don't mind my foul mouth
The apple of my eye
Who has my seeds in her belly
5 foot 5 she was the devil in disguise
Nine knives couldn't cut my throat
Quicker than U V W X Y Z.

Your face is the same
It's ashame that you changed
You call me a dick well check out my veins
You know I
You know I
You know I brought the pain.



I dedicate this to all the Tigerpaw Puppies and Ookie Zookies dying of AIDS in Africanadakotaiwantarticalifornia.
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Old 02-03-2008, 07:51 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's really pretty...

I like the suck-less line.


Do you play an instrument? I think it would sound good with guitar.
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Old 02-03-2008, 07:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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ha Leila, you don't have to lie...this is awful

I was bored and drunk the other night, I just wanted you to give me attention!!!
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Old 02-03-2008, 07:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it. Especially the thing about "The apple of my eye/Who has my seeds in her belly."


aww, Bigge... Who did you get pregnant?


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Her name was Valerie.

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Old 02-03-2008, 09:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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i don't really know about this piece... didn't get much from it

just my two...
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Her name was Valerie.

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Congrats, Mr. Bigge!! When is the baby due?
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just my two...
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this sucked Bigge

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this piece had the ill rhythm, I liked the knives alphabetty part. something wickeldly unhinged about this. keep it up, viagra pants
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