Mistaken Identity

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Old 01-31-2008, 09:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Mistaken Identity

They must be lies
Those poisonous words
They just can't be true
That person could never really be you
She's mistaken she has it all wrong in fact
I think she needs to recheck her facts
Yet the person she described looks and talks just like you
Even your scent had mixed with her perfume
Her words were like ice
Yet they scorched my skin
Layer by layer my composure fell away i was shaken outward, in the middle and deep within.

I can't believe it
It can't be true
The deceit described couldn't be stemming from you
The person i know would never
Never dream of causing me pain
Still those words keep replaying in my brain
I've lived this before
I must be cursed
Cause each time i love the result is the same and this time much worse
How could i give you my all
My everything
I put you first
But all i have now are these words that tear apart my heart.

I'm empty now all i had i gave 2 you
This person I thought so much of
The person i gave my world to
This must be lies it can't be true
The person she spoke of could never be you
You wouldn't hurt me
You wouldn't hurt me
Repetition makes it true
I wouldn't believe it
I can't believe it
You make me so happy
I refuse to believe it's lies
It can't be true
Oh please don't let that really be you.

I wouldn't know how to move on
I've built my world around you
But walls do fall
They are only stone
Mine were only love
I guess hers were too
She probably looked into your eyes and fell in love with you too
I don't want to know
Because if it's true
Then it proves i know nothing
I loved nothing
I have nothing
I am nothing...nothing...nothing to you....
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Old 02-10-2008, 11:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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There was a lot of repetition in this poem..however I'm feeling this one much. Last stanza was my favorite part. Keep writing
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interesting... i can relate in many ways... much appreciated.. keep elevaten
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