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Old 10-25-2007, 08:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I just want you to know...

There is a hole on my tounge
My dreams are stained with regret
Beautiful, the one I love
you just haven't noticed yet...

Beneath poison trees we breathe
The sky erupts in flames
Just promise me you'll never leave
Never leave me, again...

If you knew my name
could I die in your arms?
Tonight is so plain,
but your eyes are like the stars...

and you make everything worth it.

Kiss me with regret
Fill the hole on my tounge
You just haven't noticed yet
that I'm the one you love...
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Old 10-25-2007, 10:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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grabs a moment in words quite well (you still drop pieces here? respect for the longetivity) I just dropped something here after a long time, please tell me what you think.

I recall your imagery always being good and this piece is no different
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Old 10-28-2007, 04:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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and you make everything worth it.

This just makes the poem so much better for some reason. lol
Keep writing as always..
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Old 10-29-2007, 08:07 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like this...a little weird, threw me off with the "hole in my tounge" thing. still dig the drop.
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Old 10-29-2007, 12:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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a beautifully simple poem,perhaps a little cliche in stanza three but very nice
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Old 10-31-2007, 07:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Kiss me with regret
Fill the hole on my tounge
You just haven't noticed yet
that I'm the one you love...

Reallie liked that

Somehow this piece made me sort of sad well from how i imaged what you were saying at least. anyhowever... good drop
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Old 10-31-2007, 10:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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god you're sexy.
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