A Note To My Father

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Old 10-23-2007, 12:39 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A Note To My Father

Who The Fuck Care?
Who The Hell Knows
All Of My Feelings Or Any Of My Woes
Grew Up In A Home
Where Moms Had To Be Dad
Trying To Be Strong
But Feeling So Sad
Little Girl Lost
With A Father Who Gives A Fuck
Packed Up And Left Like A Theif In The Night
27 Years And He Never Turned His Head
Not Even Wondering If His Little Girl Was Dead
Family Functions
Oh! What A Mess
I Felt Like An Outkast
More Or Less
Whose Child Are You They Would Ask
I Replied,"a Friend Of The Family"
I Called Him On My Birthday
And This Man Who Is Suppose To Be My Father
Told Me Where To Go
Tears Kissed My Lips
As I Started To Say
What Could Have A Child Done
To Just Get Thrown Away?
A Mother Is Good
But A Father Is Too
He Just Didnt Know The Affect It Had On Me
It Made Me Mad
I Was Pissed Off And Hurt
I Wanted You To Lay There
While I Threw The Dirt!
You Gave A Fuck About Me
Your Only Little Girl
Wasnt I Suppose To Be The Center Of Your World?
For So Very Long You Gave Me Your Ass To Kiss
This Is Just A Little Note To Let You Know
27 Years...and Im Standing Tall
27 Years...i've Realized That I Didnt Need You At All
My Moms Was Always More Of A Man Than You
And Ill End My Thoughts
With Two Little Words....
Fuck You!!!!!!!!
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Who The Fuck Care?
Who The Hell Knows
All Of My Feelings Or Any Of My Woes
Grew Up In A Home
Where Moms Had To Be Dad
Trying To Be Strong
But Feeling So Sad
Little Girl Lost
With A Father Who Gives A Fuck
Packed Up And Left Like A Theif In The Night
27 Years And He Never Turned His Head
Not Even Wondering If His Little Girl Was Dead
Family Functions
Oh! What A Mess
I Felt Like An Outkast
More Or Less
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Whose Child Are You They Would Ask
I Replied,"a Friend Of The Family"
I Called Him On My Birthday
And This Man Who Is Suppose To Be My Father
Told Me Where To Go
Tears Kissed My Lips
As I Started To Say
What Could Have A Child Done
To Just Get Thrown Away?
A Mother Is Good
But A Father Is Too
He Just Didnt Know The Affect It Had On Me
It Made Me Mad
I Was Pissed Off And Hurt
I Wanted You To Lay There
While I Threw The Dirt!
You Gave A Fuck About Me
Your Only Little Girl
Wasnt I Suppose To Be The Center Of Your World?
For So Very Long You Gave Me Your Ass To Kiss
This Is Just A Little Note To Let You Know
27 Years...and Im Standing Tall
27 Years...i've Realized That I Didnt Need You At All
My Moms Was Always More Of A Man Than You
And Ill End My Thoughts
With Two Little Words....
Fuck You!!!!!!!!
Heavy drop ma. You can definitely since the hostility in this piece. The flow was pretty good till you got almost half way then it kinda gets emotional. Like you almost forgot you was writting this letter as a poem.
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