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Old 10-07-2007, 05:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Listen to your Mom
pass through me
with intent to just forget

i don't have time to hear your bullshit
to think that love was in the air at one point...

Erase me from your memory
No hard feelings... bitch

Mom always told me to never let my guard down
You got me... will admit that
Allow me to evade

This is the closest thing to a goodbye

so don't call me... i don't wanna hear it
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Old 10-11-2007, 10:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wow. um, very concise and to the point. imagery though, would really help this poem. we need images to work with in order to see the tangibles. this was much more like a rant than anything. add in some images though, and you could have a great poem with the emotion from this.
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Old 10-15-2007, 12:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yea definitely some strong feelings
to never let your guard down
it fuckin sucks when you do
it always has for me,
dope i liked the format with the quick read with this
just a very blunt and direct message
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Old 10-16-2007, 10:11 AM   #4 (permalink)
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still writing poems about me, nate?
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Old 10-21-2007, 12:39 AM   #5 (permalink)
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guarantee this poem was not about you Quotive haha

but yeah thanks for the insight

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yes it was hoe!

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