Unforgettable

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Old 05-20-2007, 05:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Unforgettable

Sunlight hits the tattered window

Waking up to floating octagons dancing gracefully across the bed sheet

Eyes flutter…the mouth forms an O

As she yawns and falls back to reality

Her weary eyes start to dance like florescent lights bringing new sights to this now unforgettable room…

Wholesome dreams turn into shattering nightmares

Discovering the crushed cans, gleaming bottles and dirty ash trays scattered on this unforgettable table…

She tries to pick herself up and just…remember…
She falls from a jolt of pain in her legs to lie back on this unforgettable bed…

Bits and Shards of last night still rummage though her weary head
Heading to a college party despite what her good friends said
She drank a little but really nothing too serious
She met this cute guy that seem really mysterious
They danced and partied until it was through
That’s when he told her that he knew what they should do
She kindly refuse and said she was going to walk back home
He offered to drive her so she didn’t have to go alone
She complained about the pulsing headache she got that night
He pulls out a pill and told her that it’ll help her alright
She took it without hesitation and she felt really fine
But now she’s sobbing at the fact that that’s all she remembers at this time

She needed help but she didn’t know where to go
No one would understand how she feels so why should anybody know?
While right now it seemed walking away was theoretical
But little did she know this is pretty unforgettable..
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Old 05-28-2007, 02:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i read it over like 3 times
i really like it...good STUFF
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