Don't Call Me No More (SOME DEEP FROM THE SOUL)

[WisEGuY]

Listen up... Don't call me no more,
I can't keep fallin for some alcoholic whore,
who can't even afford to shop at the dollar store,
plus ever since last time I hit it... my balls been sore,
so if you call Im'a ignore.. cuz now I'm sure that you played me,
I ain't hurt.. just angry you played and betrayed me,
feel like it can't be,
can't believe it.. the memories I'm tryin to erase,
swallowed so much pride I can taste it,
how could you lie to my face?
lied to God.. bitch you lied to yourself,
thought I was against you.. well I was just tryin to help,
your a liar.. of the pathological kind,
but I'll grow wiser... in this path I follow through time,
and that's all that heals but still I can't deal wit the way I feel,
so I try to drown it in the bottle.. but don't pop no pills,
talk to my notebook.. not to no Dr. Phils,
......Karma is the truth, something bads gonna happen to you I'm sure of it,
how could you do something so terrible.. and still be rewarded,
if I kill someone I know someone probably gonna kill me for it,
but I could never be so selfish,
to damage someone so bad.. and just leave them helpless,
and I know I been far from perfect,
but what could I have possibly done to deserve this?
you need to take your ass to sunday service,
to get forgiveness.. but you'll never get mine,
so quit callin talkin about how it'll be better next time,
you damaged my trust in humanity,
talkin about the future, seein us wit a family,
little did I know you were already out buildin another home,
hope your children don't grow to know moms really was a hoe,
and Daddy could have been one of two men,
shit.. probably more.. only God knows who and when you was out screwin,
ruinin my faith in all humans,
and I ain't the one to stop someone from bein who they wanna be,
but honestly for me.. honesty is key,
and honest is the one thing you promised me to be,
shows the value of your word... the hatred for yourself,
lying to people that care.. hope you feel half the pain that I felt,
it's just one more thing for me to be complainin about,
sometimes I dang near felt like takin off my belt and just hangin myself....


just a lil venting I did after goin thru a rough break up wit a fake ass girl.... anyway this piece actually helped me through the tough time..... it's more of a rap than a poem but its from the soul none the less........

[Lesha3721]

Wow i really like this poem, it was deep and raw at the same time. I could tell it was just thoughts going through your head that you had to release, i know how that feels, you do feel a lot better afterwards. Good Job, Keep doin ya thing

[dripnotiC]

hey man just on some advice shit... there is some truth behind people saying "theres always more fish in the sea"... but take it deeper than that and realize that you hold the key to your own happiness... so why are you trying to find happiness in fish?

just do you, the best you can... and let the women rely on you.

[v0id]

Originally Posted by dripnotiC

hey man just on some advice shit... there is some truth behind people saying "theres always more fish in the sea"... but take it deeper than that and realize that you hold the key to your own happiness... so why are you trying to find happiness in fish?

just do you, the best you can... and let the women rely on you.

=) that's good advice right there, nice line with the "so why are you trying to find happiness in fish?"

and yea that was a good piece i can tell that's like a train of thought

[SAMARA]

what a vent!

ex post facto... does your soul feel better now?