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Black Liquid · 04-26-2007, 11:50 PM

this war
is worth
fightin

thats why
theyre all
frightend

i know

how low
theyve
fallen

cuz i
was just
like em

till night
turned
to day

and i
saw that
light is

still
shinin
behind
em

so i

kept
writin

ten
down
the line

never
blew

never
signed

locked
behind

bars

no matter
what

still
rhyme

tell em
a million
times

from
symbol
to simplified

they
need

some black
liquid
for that
soap
in their
mind

rinse
lather
repeat

learn
from
your
defeat

watch out

for the
devil

you are
your own
enemy

rats
run from
ships

when they
start to
sink

they

say

"i am"

therefore,

i think
-Liq
www.myspace.com/blackliq
WOFTD

Philly_215 · 04-27-2007, 01:15 PM

nice flow fam

RealMS · 05-20-2007, 05:34 PM

oh snap, you still got it. I love how you ended it. Further up I kind of lost flow but that doesn't matter to me at all, lol. Keep writing.

-Much Love

04-26-2007, 11:50 PM	#1 (permalink)
Black Liquid Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 234	<o> this war is worth fightin thats why theyre all frightend i know how low theyve fallen cuz i was just like em till night turned to day and i saw that light is still shinin behind em so i kept writin ten down the line never blew never signed locked behind bars no matter what still rhyme tell em a million times from symbol to simplified they need some black liquid for that soap in their mind rinse lather repeat learn from your defeat watch out for the devil you are your own enemy rats run from ships when they start to sink they say "i am" therefore, i think -Liq www.myspace.com/blackliq WOFTD

04-27-2007, 01:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
Philly_215 The Silent Poet Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: some time here and sometimes there Posts: 426	nice flow fam __________________ "No bodies going to love me like me so i'm a soul provider" Joe Buddens "So for all you wana be's who's attitude is shitty God don't like ugly but he aint to fond of pretty neither" Lyfe Jennings http://www.myspace.com/watcher07

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05-20-2007, 05:34 PM	#3 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,184	oh snap, you still got it. I love how you ended it. Further up I kind of lost flow but that doesn't matter to me at all, lol. Keep writing. -Much Love

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