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Old 04-23-2007, 05:38 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I never write poetry and I'm not really good at it, but i felt like writing one night and this is what i came up with... tell me what you think:

I've been poppin pills and drinkin daily
I'm just trying to hide from the realities i've been facin lately
My minds been racin and really i'm not even tryin to hide
I wish i had a click remote and could just fast forward all the pain i'm feelin inside
I don't play games and I'm not fuckin with your head
because I know that leads to bullshit and people stop believin whats said
the only thing you have in this world is your word and the fam
so be careful with the ones you trust because no one wants to get screwed time and again
i cherish what i have and that may make me seem needy
but unlike HALF the mother fuckers out there I have your back if you ever need me
don't take my kindness for weakness i've said it time and again
i fight for my beliefs and i'm not just some backup plan
i'm not here to be used and i'm looking for more then just friends
I want to expand my family and find more people to let in
I'm really tired and I never wanna stop
but it seems like sometimes I have nothing to live for and i'm just gonna pop
I'm like a shook can of soda and i'm about to blow right through this screw off top
when I blow nothing is gonna hold me bAck,
I'm going out like the dude that shot up VTU and ending all this crAp
I would never do that though because life is too precious to throw away
you have to remember that tomarrow is not promised today
rumor has it that the best things in life don't require you to pay
if that were true then no one would worry about living from day to day
nothing is free and i'm not just talkin dollars
because every action has a reaction and decisions can either cut you down or make you grow taller
you need to be focused, have goals, put in work, and stay on the right track
that way when your gone you will have lived a full life and you wont be sitting there wishing you could play it all back
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Old 04-24-2007, 01:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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not bad at all-- i thought it was good . kind of funny reading your emotions change. you start out down in the dumps -- alittle annoyed--- then up and kind of reminding yourself what you have to do. writing is the best medicine right? or was that sleep? whatever keep writing lol
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Old 04-24-2007, 07:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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haha thanks, it was more theraputic then anything
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