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Old 04-19-2007, 01:43 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 05-01-2007, 01:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I chose to write to this pitcure just because there are a bunch of jumbled up words, and sort of remind me of how my mind has been feeling since the beginning of the year.

Renew

For the past 3 years...
I've shed many tears...
Filled with paralyzing fears,
Raging anger and growing pains....
For different reasons, situations...
From different people and different things....
I've acted out in crazy ways....
And there's no excuse for my behavior....
No one to blame,
And no way to explain it either....
Trying so desperately to prove my love for others,
Instead of just loving Eva!
I'm even bitter....
To the point where I can't forgive and move on....
I've gone thru alot...
But still I dont feel strong...
Alot of times I'm wrong...
And haven't cared enough to correct mistakes....
Crying out for attention....
Nevere giving, but always willing to take...
I can't shake these bad feelings....
Can't let go of these bad vibes....
I don't want to covere up the hurt anymore....
Don't want to continue to hide....
Behind many masks...
And characteristical lies...
I've tried to define who I am...
But honestly, I'm not sure...
Learning to lean on the Lord's understanding...
Believing he'll reveal to alot more....
I'm bored with life...
But I know no change comes over night...
So tonight I'll cry....
I'll pray, dry my eyes...
Lay down to a peaceful night of sleep....
And in the morning, everything will be alright.....
Atleast I hope it willl

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Old 05-10-2007, 03:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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This Is It

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We wings and dreams
seems to me dreams are the thing
will it ever come to be
or will it just come to me in dreams.....


“THIS IS IT”

We in the 6 deadliest sins, plus the FT’s we go to make em
got us in the mind frame of should we forsake him-
more like they forgot him
Lord please won’t you for give them-
they lost in this man made mayhem

“THIS IS IT”

I’m tired of the make believe gossips
so God wont you please spray them
Cause their desires are similar to a shrapnel affect
cutting niccaz necks killing men over fools gold and hood sets
So the words you wrote them, seem like and after death affect
I guess we won’t get it Lord, until we meet our deaths

“THIS IS IT”

I know it just poe-rap-try y’all,
but its deeper than the abysm sins we set
like lustful decisions, I know it delicious,
her fruit and skins the hex got us fucken the visions
Plus we taken and making wrong moves like Iraq Missions

“THIS IS IT”


and mass judgment is next, believe this People
the Judgements is swift like a guillotine, my equals
that’s how I’d go- head gone for this Jesus theme my brotha
like thugs and those Vets who loose by what a judge screams,

“THIS IS IT”

Locked away never to see our kids eat mike and Ike’s
like we likes to do back high school,
I know truth black who be the realist even when looked upon as less fools
nonetheless dude, I paint pictures so you can see what lies are like lye
burning the liars mouth through and through,
I be truth because i’m ammuned to fake ties



“THIS IS IT”


SO I make ties tight like Jesus and the Lord,
cause LYfe, I'd die for something than die for nothing
So thank you Lord And thank you Jesus for giving me everything
Like Martin Luther King I still hold dreams for every being

“THIS IS IT”
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Old 05-15-2007, 12:29 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I choose the first one, cause thats how I use to feel, because it felt like there was no hope.

For as long as I can remeber,
Shit change never stays the same,
There is no hope as it seems,
When something seems right,
Something always fu*k up thou,
If its not one thing its another,
But fu*k that U can't sit back and let time fly by,
U got to spread ur wings and make sh*t happen,
Lift ur head up smile and keep it moving.
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Old 05-19-2007, 04:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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BLEED HERE
Take
These
Broken Wings
World on my shoulders
I'm holding the scene.
New world wonder
Cold though it seems
Face
Chagrin
A grin
in the seams
True to believe
You two deceive
Wings hold the devil
Heavenly the scene
No
Hope
stand in Amphitheatres
Lions den of thievery
Need me a redeemer
Need me some ether
Need me a healer
First need to believe
that I need to be here
Quiet
Demons
We
Hear
Forget
Whatever you see
here.
Gotta make a decision
Try to be what you need here.

I'm trying










Not




























To
bleed here.
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Slip of the soul, eyes widespread of glimmering gold,
cut cries of forked tongues through that slithering soulbound
moment.

Hold it, mold it or even more daring won't you open
another case of the broken bottles?

No, why not just walk about the towers where the butterfly
made the owl sit down to read the Bible. It seems that
even the wise can shed a tear for but a trifle matter like an
unsung mile that never saw the Eiffel smile across the horizon.

She won't spread those wings, her unwrapped present foiled and ribboned,
another picture-perfect palette, that I called Woman. Sung in shades of blissful
blue.

Through the beating eyelids, catch a flicked-flame-flickering, a forked-tale-lingering, a sing-song-stolen sonnet in shades of breathing blackened
bruise.

"Dance", he said.
So much as cried out, across the bayou
her spirit cruised.


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Old 07-16-2007, 06:21 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Scripts of broken thoughts
Letters of stripped words
Symbols of tattered thoughts
Scribbled on a page of abomination
Mechanical institutions of what art is
Generated sequels of words are
Dumb founded individual gawk after
Naive poet of picture
Do not feel my words
Do not hear my perspective
Or breathe my innovation or ingenuity
Live my stroke
Or see my passion
Look in as a
I am...
Statement
I am…
Truth
I am…
Life
I seek nothing
Starving for perfection,
Longing for consistency
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Old 07-19-2007, 05:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Using someones words (for lack of a better title)

I wrote to this because I saw on another site that someone was using others words to express their feelings without giving people thier rightful credit...Just glancing at this picture made me think of it and what I wrote because I found it immature and wrong to do such a thing....
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People sprawl these words so frivolously
all I can think of those who use them
without thinking

loose lips
on cherry flavored lollipops
like childhood dreams

The words once came now stopped
And the kids sit and grow
sucking life through a straw

never really thinking they can have it all
in one huge gulp

So they sprawl words all over the page
Frivolously …oh so frivolously
Thinking that no one will really

Would really care if they used their words
Just freely
Here and there so freely

And the authors of those words
Dreams that sat within the binding of their books
Are now used without knowledge

Floating into someone else’s sticky hands
Sticky with cherry flavored lollipops
Holding childhood dreams
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Old 09-03-2007, 07:38 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Carrying all this weight on my shoulders.
On the emotions of those around me
Surround me
Surround my thoughts
Surround my prayers
Surround my being
Worrying that I can't influence them by the way i walk and the way i talk
Reminding them that I am not perfect yet striving for That Perfection
Subjected to the pain of others
Carrying burdens that don't belong to me
Gotta learn to cast all my cares and theres too

Havn't been poetically flowing like I should
Sitting around with so many words swimming in my brain
Drowning from from the clutter that seems to remain
Years of headache, heartache
Years of pain that just won't seem to go away
Yet my face never show it
The smile I wear displays peace and joy
That can't no one take a way
Carrying all this weight on my shoulders
Is just making me bolder
Stronger
Wiser
Making me into
Me
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