~Seeking~ (my first poem on here)

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Old 04-14-2007, 05:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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~Seeking~ (my first poem on here)
Intellectual
Searching for life’s true meaning
Spirit broken down

Sometimes unsound in
Judgment intentions blurry
God grants wisdom quick

To those who seek it
Relief, momentarily
Peace reached forever
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Old 04-17-2007, 10:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome.

Nice haiku. Can always appreciate someone with a sense of structure. Please stick around.
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Old 04-18-2007, 05:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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First off welcome to the realm. It's always good to see new people coming in. I must say after all the years I've been here I never seen a new poet come in dropping a haiku lol. Really looking foward to seeing more work by you soon.

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Old 04-25-2007, 09:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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thank you, I hope to drop a poem every now and then
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