Not myself

kstroyer · 09-07-2006, 01:53 PM

Feelings that i just dont deal with..
oceans deep pitted versus my self.
Dissing the hurt watching it simmer with greed..
as it battles emotions to take over my self..

the first eye tear, the colossus of them all..
its the one i fear, it breaks down the wall..
it causes more to follow to escape this turture..
live in an inferno and then take judgment on me..

my mind invisions different secenarios playing..
orchastrated by characters, star role is you..
cut scene edit roll tape the director is saying..
make up,, my scene's next are the words from you..

Cant be thats underlying currents screaming..
orgasmic shrills are fleeting,a flicker of the past..
so to get past my past i realize some past aint past its present..
question next is when will all this bs be through..

paranoia sets in as my thoughts bombard..
im like porous squares, all absored so to speak..
softly as my whispers in night time ear close..
by yours so cold..i see when our whispers meet..

plan seems Automatic to stare tragic or jump with dramatical antics..
its much harder to stay calm and express your inner being.
so i run like refugee from the inner me, taking refuge in a strange land..

thats not myself...
thats not myself...
thats not myself...

DenDen · 09-09-2006, 03:58 PM

"the first eye tear, the colossus of them all..
its the one i fear, it breaks down the wall.."

This was the part that stood out most to me. I like it!

When you have the chance, could you give me some feedback on the topic i posted called Skin on Skin.

CLICK HERE TO VISIT THE TOPIC

Peace,

~WORDZ~ · 09-11-2006, 01:28 AM

I liked the imagination running in this piece. Nice drop.

09-07-2006, 01:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
kstroyer Registered User Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: a Dark Alley Posts: 176	Not myself Feelings that i just dont deal with.. oceans deep pitted versus my self. Dissing the hurt watching it simmer with greed.. as it battles emotions to take over my self.. the first eye tear, the colossus of them all.. its the one i fear, it breaks down the wall.. it causes more to follow to escape this turture.. live in an inferno and then take judgment on me.. my mind invisions different secenarios playing.. orchastrated by characters, star role is you.. cut scene edit roll tape the director is saying.. make up,, my scene's next are the words from you.. Cant be thats underlying currents screaming.. orgasmic shrills are fleeting,a flicker of the past.. so to get past my past i realize some past aint past its present.. question next is when will all this bs be through.. paranoia sets in as my thoughts bombard.. im like porous squares, all absored so to speak.. softly as my whispers in night time ear close.. by yours so cold..i see when our whispers meet.. plan seems Automatic to stare tragic or jump with dramatical antics.. its much harder to stay calm and express your inner being. so i run like refugee from the inner me, taking refuge in a strange land.. thats not myself... thats not myself... thats not myself... __________________ C.O.S

09-09-2006, 03:58 PM	#2 (permalink)
DenDen The Voice of Reason Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 14	"the first eye tear, the colossus of them all.. its the one i fear, it breaks down the wall.." This was the part that stood out most to me. I like it! When you have the chance, could you give me some feedback on the topic i posted called Skin on Skin. CLICK HERE TO VISIT THE TOPIC Peace, __________________ M U S I C G R O O V E E N T E R T A I N M E N T Online Community \| Online Store \| Free Beats Last edited by DenDen; 09-09-2006 at 04:05 PM.

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09-11-2006, 01:28 AM	#3 (permalink)
~WORDZ~ Words are my mind state Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in the inner circle Posts: 196	I liked the imagination running in this piece. Nice drop.

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