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Old 07-29-2006, 11:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I Believe It

You were the one I always saw beneath the sun.

I'd chase you like a child running
to and from the waters washing up to shore.
It was you who I saw standing beside the cellar door
and in your eyes I saw a dream of lasting love
with a life span of forever more
I asked you if you could blow out the stars
and let the twinkle in your eye light up the world.
You formed a smile with a gentle laugh
that echoed in my present and settled in my future.


"I love you, I love you, I love you..."

Believe me yet, or do I have to say it again?
But it wasn't you I was trying to convince over time.
I wanted to believe I could love like any normal man could
and find a love pure and wild like any man should.

And I did.

No longer do I chase you beneath the sun.
I've found out what it means to find and capture love.
I've kept you in day, danced in the evening
And held you throughout the night
without any worry of what hurt shall appear in life.
Love has introduced me to wisdom
that had a new feeling of self worth close beside it.
But, I felt the doubts inside of my heart,
although the solitude wasn't too far off behind it.

I'm older and stronger now with partly you to thank
and I've proven myself by protecting my love.
And this world doesn't always work with you
but now that I've lived these nineteen years
I feel like I've got a better idea of what I'm getting into,

And I'm fine with that now,

I've adjusted and accepted the horrors of reality
which strangely only strengthened the beauty that existed.
So, I'm even happier now and see life in a new way
with a new found appreciation for the love and hate within it.

And somehow, someway, you're still here.
So, I've done nothing but weakened all of my fears
and focused in on the horizon
as my mind and heart worked together
to make everything else in this world of mine clear.

But, nothing became clearer then the journey
our love has taken and still takes
till this very day.


"I love you, I love you, I love you..."

...I believe it now.
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Old 08-01-2006, 03:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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been a while man....but also a pleassure to read your work....man you been thru alot....but I've notice a change in you andyour work...it used to be dark and edgy....now its more grounded and tone....I like the growth love has done in your life.....given your background of being cheated on and who knows what other untold drama that happen in yo past....its hard to let that stuff go the next day or so....we talking years of mental emotional spiritual and even physical training to escape from....and I like this path you on now

you gotta believe in yourself first when you can't....and then with that same energy believe in someone else

hard work

thats the way love goes


props man

try to respone to others so this doesnt get slept on.....I also hated how cats sleep on your poems just because its a little longer then the next man.....truly missing out



PS: ALSO HIT ME UP FOR A POET HIGHLIGHT and that Haiku
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Old 08-05-2006, 05:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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