Battle Of The Sexiest Team 1 Matches

[UFO the Phoenix]

Females Team 1:

a) MISSKEYdaQUEEN
b) MarQuise*
c) Xyliere

Vs.

Males Team 1:

a) MANchyld (DaRk NeBuLa)
b) Poetickz
c) Madnick

underline theme this week is "Life Struggles"

If you can't organize your team for a collabo post something solo


POEMS DUE APRIL 3!!!!!!!!!!!!! (extend to 4/7)


whoever you pick to vote off you will need to make it public by April 8 (you can vote off no shows or whoever isn't carrier their weight....remember its gonna come down to the top female vs. the top male)

ok, I can't PM Madnick cuz his thing is full and he's never on AIM and it wouldn't be fair to be penalized cuz of it.....

This is ur thing UFO so what's gonna be the solution for that? Me and Poeticz have been able to vibe a lil bit exchanging PMs because we're seperted by an 8 hours time difference. Post something solo against a collab? seems very odd and before I put more effort in doing this I want to know wassup.

Next time could we go over rules and things in a thread before these tournaments start because it seems that starting them before all inquiries are answered only leads to confusion and wasted time. There should be a clear understanding of all rules and regulations before matches are set up and the participants should have some say in how things will be set up incase there's a disagreement.


give it some thought for next tourney holmes, but I'll do my best for this one and hope it just works out

[UFO the Phoenix]

^word up yo my bad.....but lot of things going down and I dont wanna sit on this

we been over this for the past week or so, the people involed have the say....this is your team.....you can roll solo or crew/collabo....when the dust clears you guys decide who came correct who held it down the best for the "males"...for example....and who didnt help or put in the effort.....might not wanna go to the finals....but thats when you can vote them out....you guys decide....(those are my rules)

verse no longer then 30 lines....(collabo 90 lines)

ya'll knew about this in advance I dont see whats the problem?

good luck to both sides

[Poetickz]

i say we jus do 3 1 vs 1's since we cant get a hold of eachother...i think ima just post solo.
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[DiC GeTs GuLLy]

the problem is there was no time to get this done right and the rules aren't clear so with no rules posted in the match thread, this will obviously have problems just like the final round of the reality show with EP getting 6 votes for something that's listed as 3.....

a detailed structure of rules needs to be put in place as well as posted in each match for poets to refer to

time needs to be taken to organize all of this correctly

[AlmostFamous]

yes sir...^^

[UFO the Phoenix]

lot of talk but wheres the art?

waste enough time talking....I extended the due dates to 4/7

the longer we wait the less likly anything will happen

[MISSKEYdaQUEEN]

If my team doesn't get at me sometime today in my PM I will just drop a solo tomorrow. Aiight. So drop me a PM or something ladies! ...

[Poetickz]

girl...no one can pm u cuz u keep it full all the time, empty them shits lols...peep it...Yo MissKey
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The Heartbreak: A Love That Should Never Be Persued

Tangles and strifes bloody my hands like I've been playing with knives
Making my life a blur of madness I display in some fights
Thoughts aren't clear when all I hear leaves me tossing through nights
Nervous and weary in daylight hours drinking coffee for might
A loss of my mind has captured my vision into a glossy design
As I wake from these dreams that make me fiend and fall into crime
Desires are wasted, I can't enjoy anything without that fire- The Matrix
A higher replacement of my pressence to reach the sky and embrace it
That's where I can hide in my spaceship and escape from it all
Reality is the illusion as colorful dreamworlds erase all the laws
But when I awakwen I've lost and this isn't the way that I saw.......
My face on the wall, getting arrested with police breaking my jaw

Fiending Her Love

In lock down going through shaky withdrawls, I'm starting to freak
Supplying me temporary treatments before I'm charged and released
Starving, asleep, still I have the strength to get to the park for a treat
The darkness released from my soul as I stroll and dart through the streets
My heart's growing weak, the doctors say it's from the poison I 've fed it
Breaking my own heart without real love to destroy and neglect it
Unemployed and pathetic, the only thing I look for hope in my pressence
Comes in a crystal form then I'm reborn from holding its essence
Increasing my heart rate so it's already countered prescriptions......
That I should take more often instead of waiting 'til I fall down in the kitchen
Clutching my chest, my stomach reflexed while the punishment sets
Funneling breaths like I'm inhaling a dungeon of webs
Grabbing the bottle of meds too late so I just gag on the flavor
As the heart attack persisted I'm still high so I imagined I'm greater
Crystal meth was the love I chose to submit my death
As every inch of my flesh tingled exuberance, my soul gets to rest

Permanently Releasing All Of Life's Tensions and Stress
Feelings Repressed As My Existence Falls In The Pits Of Depressed

The end of this poem is also my ending I guess.......

[Madnick]

Yo I'm here... Tell me what I need to write and I'll write it...

it's way too late for that.... you need to just look at the topic and look at what i wrote and write something I guess..... it's due today

[Xyliere]

Midlife Crisis ~ The Story of One Woman


"Straightjackets"

Was all I spoke, imprisoning whispers of time

The body, containing the mind,
While staying acute the flesh rots away,
Aging until raw into born again
as though it were a mere corpse.

Piercings of the truth harangue into ears,
Wailing from the inside and mimicking on the out.
Ill-bred holy totems telling of a life dauntlessly,
Infallible kamikazes of the false gods on Earth,

And only a straightjacket can keep them within...

"Straightjackets."







I apologize for the sloppiness of this piece to my team mates and to you all, but since I have yet to go through any real "life struggles", this is the best I could come up with.

[Poetickz]

I sit beside you flooding with tears in my eyes
hearin the lies, forced to continue to appear in disguise
forcin fake smiles of comfort as i peer in your eyes
shredding our lives as im forced to see and hear all your cries

see and feel all the tubes that force you to continue to live
within you i'd give my life, anything to help you forget
the pain, and feelings of being unable to move, unable to lift
painful and torturing tribute to live curse this artificial gift

forever your husband arguing with the family
scandeling, trying to get a better hand on these things
every channel i see on tv has a different pan on these things
but i know what you want cuz its what you told me, the man of your dreams

i stand and i see the window, mobs of people standin outside
police and security gaurdin the doors, people shouting "that man is a lie!!!"
emotions build from this conflict, i continue to hold your hand as i cry
times up, time to make the decision that u wished before, i can, and abide.

with you as i cry...happy you'll be in peace...they start pullin the plug
gradually start fading away, but they plug u back in from the powers above
time goes on, decision is made, to let you go in peace yet again
revived at the last minute, the church claims to let you rest with ease is a sin

and yet again you live, more pain and agony, i continue to give you my love
Articifical Life holds you within, you should be in heaven watching down from above
finally, no more pain and suffering, we're able to accomplish our wish
and with a final kiss, knowing how much you'll be missed,
you enter the gates of paradise and bliss

[UFO the Phoenix]

Xyliere came thru

Manchyld and poetickz holding it down


madnick and misskey? didnt expect you to no show....

I'll leave this open for the public

also the people who did show up decide who you want to vote off (most likly the no shows will get voted off first)

[Poetickz]

yea...ima have to say madnick...no-show u gotta go.
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[RealMS]

Well we all know the ones who are going, wasn't really hard to come to that decision, but I'm going to print these out and read them, I'll come back and leave my comments. Glad yall three pulled through.

-Much Love

[MISSKEYdaQUEEN]

sorry guys...I had some extreme issues. It's been a little hectic and I had last minute ~~~~~~ wrenchs. Mad love to everyone though...I'm such a boob!

Marquise can go.... she's been on here long enough to know when to show up

oh, this is Manchyld for those that don't know

[MarQuise*]

Hold up, my circumstances hav been kinda krazy, and the last thing i wanted to do was write, i got personal shit goin on, plus i had mad amounts of coursework to hand in, and i got exams comin next week, so my bad to my team, i hope u will be able to understand..

Im sorry for not showing though...

Pe@cE