I Tihnk I Might've Stepped In Your Pumas

MythFlowLogical · 09-01-2004, 03:54 PM

a spoken word joint..

i really like how this came out.. any feedback critique will be returned and is appreciated.. its by the same name on the page.. should be at the top

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/my...gicalmusic.htm

MythFlowLogical · 09-02-2004, 12:50 AM

no replies makes me a sad panda

Mind~$oul · 09-02-2004, 04:49 AM

post this in the intercourse next time

Surreal The A.D. Prophet · 09-02-2004, 03:42 PM

Clean meter.

subject matter is a little played ...actually a lot played.

but you did your topics justice. strong. and very few people are going to ask for better subject matter. wasnt horrible...you didnt take it too far...but you didnt take it too far...and i think that iws what i wanted.

take singe topics or themes and run them till the end. LoL but that's me.

09-01-2004, 03:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
MythFlowLogical Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: indianapolis Posts: 239	I Tihnk I Might've Stepped In Your Pumas a spoken word joint.. i really like how this came out.. any feedback critique will be returned and is appreciated.. its by the same name on the page.. should be at the top http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/my...gicalmusic.htm __________________ aka IllLiterature of the ILL MIC AFFILIATES

09-02-2004, 12:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
MythFlowLogical Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: indianapolis Posts: 239	no replies makes me a sad panda __________________ aka IllLiterature of the ILL MIC AFFILIATES

09-02-2004, 04:49 AM	#3 (permalink)
Mind~$oul I'm Pretty Join Date: Apr 2001 Location: North Memphis BITCH! Posts: 17,139	post this in the intercourse next time __________________ "Everybody wanna be a nicca, but don't nobody wanna be a nicca"-Paul Mooney "I tried to live right, but society aint made for niccas to live right"-Joe Budden

09-02-2004, 03:42 PM	#4 (permalink)
Surreal The A.D. Prophet Wondrous Poetic Join Date: Jun 1999 Location: Surreality, Surreality Posts: 1,809	Clean meter. subject matter is a little played ...actually a lot played. but you did your topics justice. strong. and very few people are going to ask for better subject matter. wasnt horrible...you didnt take it too far...but you didnt take it too far...and i think that iws what i wanted. take singe topics or themes and run them till the end. LoL but that's me. __________________ look at it this way, i COULD have said "nice post" and left it at that, but you wouldnt have to figure out what is wrong with me then, would you?

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