Check These Out

Justin85 · 08-15-2004, 02:24 AM

These tracks are some of the tracks that will be featured on My first album. I've been working on My first album for a few weeks now. I hopefully will be releasing it in the fall time or sooner.

Check It Out Here

The tracks are called

The Day We Reached Our Destinies
Your Blind Heart!! (Short Poem Dedicated 2 all stuck up people)
Mother Nature's Broken Heart

Please, tell me what you really think of them. I want a response and to see what people think of the tracks before I release the album. Thanks.

Justin

RealMS · 08-15-2004, 01:37 PM

The first one "The Day We Reached Our Destinies" was good. The poem was nice, but when you speak your poems out it sounds like you're dragging while reading. Maybe add some emotion to it. Mother Nature's Broken Heart was really nice, my favoritie of all three. Keep this posted and let us know when you're finished with your project, I never thought of putting together a spoken word album. Good work.
-Much Love

08-15-2004, 02:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
Justin85 True Poetical Emcee Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 243	Check These Out These tracks are some of the tracks that will be featured on My first album. I've been working on My first album for a few weeks now. I hopefully will be releasing it in the fall time or sooner. Check It Out Here The tracks are called The Day We Reached Our Destinies Your Blind Heart!! (Short Poem Dedicated 2 all stuck up people) Mother Nature's Broken Heart Please, tell me what you really think of them. I want a response and to see what people think of the tracks before I release the album. Thanks. Justin Last edited by Justin85; 08-15-2004 at 02:29 AM.

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08-15-2004, 01:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
RealMS Pro 31 Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Lafayette/New Orleans, LA Posts: 4,184	The first one "The Day We Reached Our Destinies" was good. The poem was nice, but when you speak your poems out it sounds like you're dragging while reading. Maybe add some emotion to it. Mother Nature's Broken Heart was really nice, my favoritie of all three. Keep this posted and let us know when you're finished with your project, I never thought of putting together a spoken word album. Good work. -Much Love

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