Persuaded Persuasions

Black Liquid · 07-30-2004, 03:34 AM

path ridden
like a
road to perdition
steep admission
when i speak
they say im deep
but dont really listen
sharp as opinion
minions
within dominion
get struck down
with precision
i provide
definition
words writtin
in third dimension
liberation
from machinations
and mental prisons
paradoxal positions
schism afflictions
through this mission
get my point across
like a christian
die for
what you livin
rules of the system
by which were drivin
i sense division
even in
undivided attention
tension
complications
confrontations
awaitin
separation
persuaded
persuasions
sick of bein
patient
they said
it wont be easy
but i know
we can make it
-Liq

Anaphora · 07-30-2004, 03:56 AM

Wrong forum liq, that goes in the poetry realm after you've replied to 3 pieces

07-30-2004, 03:34 AM	#1 (permalink)
Black Liquid Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 234	Persuaded Persuasions path ridden like a road to perdition steep admission when i speak they say im deep but dont really listen sharp as opinion minions within dominion get struck down with precision i provide definition words writtin in third dimension liberation from machinations and mental prisons paradoxal positions schism afflictions through this mission get my point across like a christian die for what you livin rules of the system by which were drivin i sense division even in undivided attention tension complications confrontations awaitin separation persuaded persuasions sick of bein patient they said it wont be easy but i know we can make it -Liq

07-30-2004, 03:56 AM	#2 (permalink)
Anaphora was here Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,694	Wrong forum liq, that goes in the poetry realm after you've replied to 3 pieces __________________ -- -- -- -- "Those who know they are profound strive for clarity. Those who would like to seem profound strive for obscurity." -Nietzsche -- -- -- -- -- -- This isn't a place for people to improve. This is a support group, where everybody just pats each other on the back and give words of encouragement. -predicate* on the poetry realm*

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