my talent show piece--tell me your thoughts

DaJackle · 07-29-2004, 09:52 PM

hey guys, i'm doing this talent show...well...lol it's kinda my first time doing a spoken piece...i recorded myself doing...if you can listen and give me feedbacks, and any advice will be appreciated...thanks...it's a poem from one of by battle in the Poet tree...i like the message in it

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1460470&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1460470&q=Hi

allnakey · 07-29-2004, 11:45 PM

The quality of it kind of sucks, but other then that i thought it was real nice. I like the piece a lot and i liked the way it was read out, I could feel the emotion in it and the message of it came through nicely. I love spoken words...

Stay Up, Much Love, Peace

07-29-2004, 09:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Pittsburgh Posts: 493	my talent show piece--tell me your thoughts hey guys, i'm doing this talent show...well...lol it's kinda my first time doing a spoken piece...i recorded myself doing...if you can listen and give me feedbacks, and any advice will be appreciated...thanks...it's a poem from one of by battle in the Poet tree...i like the message in it http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1460470&q=Lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/strea...D=1460470&q=Hi __________________ You can only do so much in life, at some point you just have to let go and let God decide...what is the meaning of life? it's very simple...to simply live Last edited by DaJackle; 07-29-2004 at 09:55 PM.

07-29-2004, 11:45 PM	#2 (permalink)
allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 2,860	The quality of it kind of sucks, but other then that i thought it was real nice. I like the piece a lot and i liked the way it was read out, I could feel the emotion in it and the message of it came through nicely. I love spoken words... Stay Up, Much Love, Peace __________________ And I sat watching a flower As it was withering I was embarrassed by its honesty So I'd prefer to be remembered as a smiling face Not this fucking wreck That's taken its place get some balls biatch or else

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