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Old 06-07-2004, 07:20 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's what you'll be doing...

Time
dream
death
journey
sex
war
suicide
racisim
culture
misery

You will pick one of those words and write a poem. The poem must have an intro and an outro. The intro and outro must be in cinquain form (5 line poem) using the word you picked . For those of you that do not know how to write a cinquain i'll show you....



Line1: one word to name the subject tree
Line 2: two words to describe it.... tall, green
Line 3: three action words about it... growing, reaching, standing
Line 4: a four or five word phrase describing the subject (a thought, not a complete sentence) a witness to the past

Line 5: one word that means the same thing as the first word, or a word that sums it all up. future

Tree
tall, green
growing, reaching, standing
a witness to the past
future


Here goes another example...

Snowman
Chubby, cheerful
Waiting, grinning, winking
Icy weather keeps him smiling
Frosty

Simple.....




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Voting due Friday, June 18th
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Old 06-07-2004, 09:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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What the fuck... hmmmmm
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Old 06-07-2004, 10:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Oh god, if you have a problem with it aint no tellin what other people are gonna be saying.
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Old 06-08-2004, 06:57 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 06-08-2004, 07:33 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Dont worry about this, i got it
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Old 06-09-2004, 01:56 PM   #6 (permalink)
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tooshort21 takes it up the butt!
so what exactly do we have to do to be qualified for this? ive wrote this kind of stuff before
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Old 06-10-2004, 07:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
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doesnt seem that hard to me
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Old 06-14-2004, 07:09 AM   #8 (permalink)
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aarrgghhh, i cant do this shit! lol
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Old 06-14-2004, 07:43 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Um MAR i think you did that wrong, the intro to your piece is suppose to be done like that, then you write a regular style poem for your body, then you do an outro cinquain


SO it's

cinquain(intro)

Anything you wanna write in any form
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./.............
...........
.........
.........
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cinquain (outro)
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Old 06-14-2004, 02:39 PM   #10 (permalink)
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none of you guys wrote cinquains in highschool? (just a question)
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Old 06-14-2004, 04:32 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Dream
sporadic, Confusion,
Sleeping, thinking, silently
The pinnacle of illusion
Rest

Inside these clouded things
Eyes that see and flying winds
Feathers drop from the sky above
Birds pass by without a song of love
Hate and deceit, feel free
Monsters that lurk are seen
The images of these pattered dreams
unpolished things
We are the dust of airs dried up fortune
In heaven the angels are naked
No wings to take us
So we escape luck
By burning patches of clovers
Blurred all over
Seen to the unseen
But unseen to realities eyes
Only in dreams

Open close the world that holds
these blind eyes unclose
This new world below
Searching in the dark
We find secrets of the heart
And death in the corner smoking a cigarette
Happy screams, and sad weddings
Funerals with clowns
And dressed in all black birthday parties
Suited for the need of confusion
Used in the state of illusion
The black coat is put on one arm at a time
These lids shut one eye at a time
And we find, lies in the earth
The pictures of given births
our eyes are open
Yet closed

Dreams
Fantasies, discovered
Living, Breathing, lying
Searching inside of life
Reality
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Old 06-15-2004, 06:17 PM   #12 (permalink)
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winner=allnakey...


makes no damn sense. All of nakey's opponents pulled a no show
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Old 06-16-2004, 09:00 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Yea now that I think About it Yea! That's kind of gay
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