my poetry battle

lewdDog · 05-15-2004, 05:26 PM

let me threw to the next round please i had work i couldnt write ill drop the 4 lines now

my escape from prision would be irelivant.
where would i go?who would care?
im better off in my prisons cell
at least they know that im unwell

Xero Satsujin · 05-15-2004, 07:10 PM

Yo man, you'd be better off hitin them up on AIM, one of the Mod's that is...They bendin the rules, so it'd be best for you to catch them while they are...

allnakey · 05-15-2004, 11:50 PM

I think he should go on... Cause there was a lot of no shows and stuff, But it also depends on even bracketing... So you may have just lucked out... And plus Soul is running the Tourny so what he says goes... Even tho you had work you should have gotten shit in.

Xero Satsujin · 05-16-2004, 02:49 AM

I agree with nakey about the whole work thing, cause I work like a slave, and I still produced a piece...but yeah, when you gotta work, you gotta work...

05-15-2004, 05:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
lewdDog Life is are own illusion Join Date: May 2003 Location: long island Posts: 340	my poetry battle let me threw to the next round please i had work i couldnt write ill drop the 4 lines now my escape from prision would be irelivant. where would i go?who would care? im better off in my prisons cell at least they know that im unwell __________________ I define myself as unusual because I do what I think is right. I feel that there's a beautiful inspiration of wisdom waiting to evolve itself into it's full natural state in which it deserves to flourish but constantly ignoring the right decision to make too to continue this world of routine of struggle with my self only to believe in self worth Some things are better unsaid; so I write them instead http://www.myspace.com/lewddog

05-15-2004, 07:10 PM	#2 (permalink)
Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Sinking into the paper, like I was ink Posts: 2,196	Yo man, you'd be better off hitin them up on AIM, one of the Mod's that is...They bendin the rules, so it'd be best for you to catch them while they are... __________________ !.¸(`!.¸Xero Satsujin¸.!`)¸.! "Laissez les bon temps rouler" "Time to a writer is like play dough in the hands of a toddler..."

05-15-2004, 11:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 2,860	I think he should go on... Cause there was a lot of no shows and stuff, But it also depends on even bracketing... So you may have just lucked out... And plus Soul is running the Tourny so what he says goes... Even tho you had work you should have gotten shit in. __________________ And I sat watching a flower As it was withering I was embarrassed by its honesty So I'd prefer to be remembered as a smiling face Not this fucking wreck That's taken its place get some balls biatch or else

05-16-2004, 02:49 AM	#4 (permalink)
Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Sinking into the paper, like I was ink Posts: 2,196	I agree with nakey about the whole work thing, cause I work like a slave, and I still produced a piece...but yeah, when you gotta work, you gotta work... __________________ !.¸(`!.¸Xero Satsujin¸.!`)¸.! "Laissez les bon temps rouler" "Time to a writer is like play dough in the hands of a toddler..."

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