spoken poetry --- no beat --- dear lord --- links and feedback welcome

RhYmE KiLLa 187 · 06-08-2003, 11:56 PM

there's no beat on this nor was it altered at all just spoken

if you feel it or not just let me know.....

Dear Lord - LO
Dear Lord - HI

oNe

Revo1 · 06-10-2003, 07:01 AM

Amen, poet. Nice ending. Intense, passionate, powerful, fierce spirit, demanding, and fevering of the word. Good job, Rhyme. Feel free to share some more, kid. peaCe Poetry.. It'sallHiphop..

BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum · 06-22-2003, 08:17 PM

You may want to back away from the mic and deliver this poem with the intensity the words demand.

Brit Boi Gee · 06-22-2003, 09:02 PM

I think it was intense enough, more would have been overdoing it. I was feeling it, it flowed nice and seemed really sincere.

stay up

Infonation · 06-23-2003, 01:06 PM

It was kinda scary, when you started gettin loud. But it had a good message, and i could feel your emotion, throughout your voice.

^One

BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum · 07-12-2003, 02:12 AM

I'm playing it again. There is distortion from being a little too close to the mic. Back away a little. and a little more emotion can be pulled off if some method acting is applied. I think that if anyone actually wants to be serious about the art of spoken word poetry, take an acting class, if only it's just one small introductory class.

Good piece. Just back up at least 4 inches from the mic. I'd say a foot or so and really let it go, nah mean?

MisterEThoughts · 07-13-2003, 05:30 AM

this was nice no doubtt

augee.ali · 07-16-2003, 12:27 AM

Yeah that shit was real nice...it startled me because it came in loud as hell. lol How did you upload that, cuz I wanna do some audio shit too...I mean can you just record that shit straight to a computer file or some shit without having to upload an MP3 or what-not?

RhYmE KiLLa 187 · 07-27-2003, 03:19 PM

Word to everyone that replied, and augee yea I actually just made this on sound recorder on my computer. But to make rap audios i just use cool edit pro to mix my beats and lyrics...

oNe

06-08-2003, 11:56 PM	#1 (permalink)
RhYmE KiLLa 187 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: KaNsAsSsS CiTtTTTTyyy!!! Posts: 40	spoken poetry --- no beat --- dear lord --- links and feedback welcome there's no beat on this nor was it altered at all just spoken if you feel it or not just let me know..... Dear Lord - LO Dear Lord - HI oNe

06-10-2003, 07:01 AM	#2 (permalink)
Revo1 Rhythms & Sounds Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 88	Amen, poet. Nice ending. Intense, passionate, powerful, fierce spirit, demanding, and fevering of the word. Good job, Rhyme. Feel free to share some more, kid. peaCe Poetry.. It'sallHiphop.. __________________ "Hip-Hop today is just like living in a dinner of thieves... Please resist the temptation."

06-22-2003, 08:17 PM	#3 (permalink)
BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview Join Date: Oct 1999 Location: San Fran to the Bahamas back to Cali in L.A. Posts: 17,465	You may want to back away from the mic and deliver this poem with the intensity the words demand. __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/blacksoultan

06-22-2003, 09:02 PM	#4 (permalink)
Brit Boi Gee manifest the zen Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Near To Athena Posts: 15,850	I think it was intense enough, more would have been overdoing it. I was feeling it, it flowed nice and seemed really sincere. stay up __________________ Those friends thou hast, and their adoption tried, Grapple them to thy soul with hoops of steel. -William Shakespeare Brit Boi has a highly calibrated wifermometer

06-23-2003, 01:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
Infonation Info for the Nation Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: ATLANTA Posts: 1,016	It was kinda scary, when you started gettin loud. But it had a good message, and i could feel your emotion, throughout your voice. ^One __________________ ".....don't give a damn if any fam recall my legacy, i'm tryin to live life in the sight of God's memory, like that y'all........"----MOS DEF

07-12-2003, 02:12 AM	#6 (permalink)
BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview Join Date: Oct 1999 Location: San Fran to the Bahamas back to Cali in L.A. Posts: 17,465	I'm playing it again. There is distortion from being a little too close to the mic. Back away a little. and a little more emotion can be pulled off if some method acting is applied. I think that if anyone actually wants to be serious about the art of spoken word poetry, take an acting class, if only it's just one small introductory class. Good piece. Just back up at least 4 inches from the mic. I'd say a foot or so and really let it go, nah mean? __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/blacksoultan

07-13-2003, 05:30 AM	#7 (permalink)
MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Bay Area,Cali Posts: 1,962	this was nice no doubtt __________________ complicated visionary....injected beauty... provided by the starry night of misery... http://www.lulu.com/browse/book_view.php?fCID=800464 My Published Book. "A Closed Window Of Truth"

07-16-2003, 12:27 AM	#8 (permalink)
augee.ali Lively Up Yourself... Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Gem City Posts: 1,734	Yeah that shit was real nice...it startled me because it came in loud as hell. lol How did you upload that, cuz I wanna do some audio shit too...I mean can you just record that shit straight to a computer file or some shit without having to upload an MP3 or what-not? __________________ *Lively Up Yourself...* And Don't Be no Drag...

07-27-2003, 03:19 PM	#9 (permalink)
RhYmE KiLLa 187 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: KaNsAsSsS CiTtTTTTyyy!!! Posts: 40	Word to everyone that replied, and augee yea I actually just made this on sound recorder on my computer. But to make rap audios i just use cool edit pro to mix my beats and lyrics... oNe

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