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Old 06-08-2003, 06:12 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Visually Loud...

This probably isn't my best bet to open this thread
up with some of my Spoken Word material,
but why not? This is the most recent Spoken Word
that I've recorded, for however old this writing is.
I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for your eyes and ears.

Click the title to link to the download track.

Multi-Dimensional (Visually Loud)

I've heard a blind man walks where a deaf man talks
out of no where, and some how it always gets to them
that some way they know how they'll always get to where's
going (or so it would seem as though). They never seem
to give up for what simple chance of losing comes showing.

The greater balance of the two is in the effort
to show forth in how you were more than the challenge
to know how to be more of a man than the risk that was involved
if you wouldn't have resolved what problems, or if you
wouldn't have overcome to find solution. Even in
the blackest of lungs pollution still resides and fights
for clean air. Oxygen may one day be sold
by the bottlefull, but who really cares?

Who knows, maybe even the blind man can share
enough of your day in enough of your time to show you
the way in which home direction your best destination
is next set in. In this exact instance of essence even
the deaf man can call to the catch of the tiniest of fraction
of sound where the rest of us are clueless as to who,
where, what, why, and even how, because we
aren't listening or living for this moment.

In this very moment we are not even seeing
a way into what's close enough here in now.
It seems that mentally we lack what's visually loud.
We're still stuck in 3-D not inclusively wondering
how, left wondering, but how?

EJGH © 2003
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Old 06-18-2003, 01:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very deep .....liked the word usage.......illness mos def..

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Old 06-18-2003, 07:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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peaCe Mocha... Thx for your Time, poet...
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