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Old 04-06-2006, 03:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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a must read diss verse

the logical condition of your renditions in generalization has amassed itself to a reformulated uneliminable contrasted form of abstract randomness unmatched in whackness

we need to rename thee as the bitch goddess of unpredictability, we cannot dethrone her

the near impossible spance of complete abandonment of all reason and meaning with contrived quantitive gap in understanding through an assault of spastic reactions proves thou hath vanquished all those who appose your devilish knack for potentially infecting the entire human race with a desease of retarded forms of lathargic lyrical parchments that form your incompetence

I can not be sure if its a diabolicly calibrated war machine of stupidity built of genious or if your truly just possess that large a capacity for idiocy

I would have to place your plague apon rap and logical thought
at the top summit of the mountain hierarchy of mounded raps
containing blatantly disregarded intelegence, coherent thought,
knowledge, and otherwise summarized latent forms of subconscious death wishes
basicly amounting to unequivecly quantifying its self as a coagulated blood clot in the viens of understandability and logical cognitive thinking

ITS BEEN CONSUMED ...shit ass bitch fuck please
I pray to the bastard of all inequities please save thee selves
if this is in fact the best she can do I pray that you don't actually have to be forced to conciously live through this life

a diagnosis of all proportions through normal thinking has only derived
comunication is detectably a conviction that you protect within the inner workings of your mind or evidence that all sense has defected or other wise abandon any concious thought processees resonated from your brain

this complete ansamble of uninhibited assinine thoughtless spasms in verbal clarity is recklessly catastrophic to anyone possesing some talent or asthetic ability

the spectacle in presentation can only be related to a systematic breakdown in sanity

it has proven to be a generalization of laimness set forth as an example of how not to rap and that infact is what I witnessed, who should be blaimed

If I am wrong this proves to be a radical conceptual inovation in linguistics
but who are we kidding I can only describe the transcription that would only be interpreted doubtlessly as a parreless example of insatialable instances of insolence through a perpetual convolution and giration of pestulance forming an artwork

a fickled friended reminder of your rhetorical incompatence
or a perpetual form of lyrical asphixiation

the very notion of exact normalicy is concluded to be eluding you and incoherent babling is all that could be indused which leaves me agahst

any more elaboration from you could be a detrimental blow to my complete concurring understanding of decency in ability or my life in general

once again your concepts and talent in whackness will remain unmatched......
is this some unkown increment injunction in creative imagination uninspired davinity callased flesh an entropy of whipped fists fades in decay or a inclination of microphone incineration

I'm in aw or disgust I cannot decide

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Old 04-07-2006, 10:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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word....little spoken word joint......I liked this.....didn't end up reading the whole thing tho, this is the kinda thing I would rather hear on audio, nah mean....

the near impossible spance of complete abandonment of all reason and meaning with contrived quantitive gap in understanding through an assault of spastic reactions proves thou hath vanquished all those who appose your devilish knack for potentially infecting the entire human race with a desease of retarded forms of lathargic lyrical parchments that form your incompetence

I can not be sure if its a diabolicly calibrated war machine of idiocy built of genious or if your truly just that full of stupidity


that shit was funny....I wanna make my neighbor read that shit....hah
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Old 04-07-2006, 03:19 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Finally takes it up the butt!
damn educated rap i think i got smarter just reading that shit lol Idk tho i couldnt finish it tho I agree wit Dubulous tho it would prolly sound good on audio
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