She dont love me (shes dyin)

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Old 09-16-2008, 03:30 AM   #1 (permalink)
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She dont love me (shes dyin)
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ever since i was 10, i lived and breathed her
i could never mistreat her or beat her or leave her
and there aint a day that passes that i dont think of her either
until the day i can see her ill stay eager
with desires burning like a fever
i need a remedy like Seether
cuz right now shes hurting me and i need her
the docs had he ron life support hes pullin the plug
she walks into the light when she sees a thug
that tells her go back its not your time
cuz its comin better verses and better rhymes
in the shape shes in, shes a sight for sore eyes
shes being killed by more guys
her lifes being filled with more lies
everyday it seems a new one bursts on the scene
as the next big thing since Angelina Jolies sex scene
cuz a few years ago my girl was sexy
i think her pain is cuz shes really stressing
cats confessing but its all fake
they dont realize whats all at stake
that boy right there.. hes lying
but she dont love me.. and shes dying

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she dont love me.. shes lying
she dont love me.. shes lying
she dont love me.. shes lying
she dont love me.. shes lying

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i try to help her but she rejects me
these cats expect me to come freshly
when they messing around to put e down
cats in the game dont care how she sounds
cuz she sounds like money, these industry buddies aint dummies
they raped her suddenly until they could take nothin
and shes practically in a hospital bed
so ima lyrically slay cats til the obstacles dead
ima put her back at full power
cuz right now its all, fools, cowards
cash and club bangers, thug sangers
no more drug slangers just these fuck anchors
holdin her down tellin her they gonna be around
until the money well dries up and they leave her down
bloody on the ground to carry her away like a dog pound
but i dont know if she can get up she took a beating
all her fights, the struggles, the bleeding
the receeding talent levels of her one night stands
less a-millis more flashing lights and
my life's ore of that real rap
this boy right here.. he aint lyin
but she dont love me.. shes dyin

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she dont love me.. shes dyin
she dont love me.. shes dyin
she dont love me.. shes dyin
she dont love me.. shes dyin

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shes been abused in her life, lived to feel pain
shes been raped by everyone from Yung Joc to Lil Wayne
by D4L, Shawty Lo and T-Pain, hyphy is still lame
crunk killed the game and its really still the same
'Pac is prolly rollin over in his grave
hiphop digressed its shit to this day
we need ore of Jay, Em, and Dre
Nas, T.I, DMX, Tech N9ne, and Game
G,G,G shit rapin the game
Soulja boy that shit was a shame
Hurricane Chris that shit was a disgrace
V.I.C your silly if you think your shits gettin played
i dont care how much you gettin paid
Trillville oh my god that shit was gay
basically my girl hit a rough patch
i swear these new cats are like fuck rap
what happened to the tough rap
the move packs, bust gats, and cash stacks
not all the cash you say you have
i think about it when i cant dream in bed
basically..shes dead
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Old 09-16-2008, 06:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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already i liked the way you set this up ... it flowed nice and told a story ... i had to read it twice but i got it ... first time i was pre-occupied but im glad i re read it homie .... nice drop
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Old 09-18-2008, 05:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 09-18-2008, 02:56 PM   #4 (permalink)
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^ lol retard you read this you didnt listen to it.. rip your eyes out and kill yourself while your at it


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Old 09-18-2008, 07:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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nice drop T.. I wasnt feeling the last verse though.. IMO it lowered the overall drop.. But thats just my 2 cents..
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Old 09-18-2008, 07:27 PM   #6 (permalink)
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thanks for the feed noble. yeah that verse wasnt too hot. i prolly shoulda left it and picked it up another time but i jus kept writing
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