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Old 08-09-2008, 01:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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im back (freestyle)
beat - soldier by eminem

YouTube - Soldier-Instrumental-Eminem

i was gone for a bit i know you missed me
fags takin advantage of my absence by dissin me
thinkin i wouldnt come back and bomb them to history
theyll come up missing itll be a new mystery
im number 1 with a bullet but i dont pack heat
jus take your bitch to the back seat
im the bad seed known as the black sheep
i rap circles around them like its a track meet
so rap about how you stack cheese
T.a.C dont give a crap if you attack me
so go left, go left, go left right left
cats are prayiin on my downfall which wont come until my death
i dont even stop to take a breath
i always keep flowin
keep them knowing
the verse may end but my raps keep going
to the top of it all
i aim for the planets so i land with the stars if i fall
i know you guys stay tryin to diss me so fuck ya'll
thats all youll get shit you aint worth a diss
the chick in your click is the only one wit a dick
so say i suck i cant rap i think im black and im wack
but be ready for me to full on attack motherfucka cuz im back
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Old 08-10-2008, 04:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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nice drop homie .... get em
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Old 08-10-2008, 05:52 PM   #3 (permalink)
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That was alright. I liked the multis and some of the flow.
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Old 08-11-2008, 03:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 08-12-2008, 12:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks dsp, rest, and p
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Old 08-12-2008, 01:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Shit was ok. You used a lotta played out concepts though, bro. Like the track meet and fallin on the stars and shit..need to keep shit fresh with this kinda flow cuz it gave it a real played out feel. I basically feel like I've read that shit a thousand times. But your other mechanics and shit are startin to get there. Just stay stronger and fresher, man. 1
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Old 08-12-2008, 01:39 AM   #7 (permalink)
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thanks bro. yeah it was just a freestyle i didnt actually write it or nothin. you should check out the a pen is my weapon collab with dsp.


and dude how do you get those links like that? mine dont work
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^I got at you about those in your PMs, bro
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Old 08-12-2008, 04:24 AM   #9 (permalink)
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yo bro,
some nice lines in that.

some of it felt a little stretched, but thats cool - as you said it was a freestyle, if you get the chance ; check out my new drop.

I'm back / Quick little Keystyle.
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