Back To School Tourney: East Rd. 3 (1. Demik vs 4. Oliver Thenet)

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Rules

- 10 Lines Max, You dont have to agree on lines either.
- 6 Lines Min.
- 4 Lines for a no show

- Check In atleast 3 hours before battles are due, or Ill count it as a no show.
- Vote on 3 battles, and post links in your thread or tell me which ones you voted on.
- No Biting
- Recycle all you want, but your just out to lose if you do.
- If I sense dickriding Ill subtract votes from your battle, so dont ride your favorite rapper, so vote fairly.

- Verses are due Monday 3am EST/ 12 Midnight Western Time
- Votes are due Wednesday 5pm EST/ 2pm Western
- Threads of each weeks brackets will be up Wednesday night

This a simple tourney with simple rules, so dont get all whinny on me.

Goodluck to all.

[Hating Mantis]

4th times a charm for you?

[Living Proof]

rival aka deon aka touch1 aka oliver thenet

[Living Proof]

A wack cat, you kids know it, hes flawed
Plus he show it, lookin like Suge Knight mixed with Poet from 'Oz'
Ill poke his mutter with cause, while he jokes and stutters
Glowin? not from sweat, this fucks shavin with butter
You trash, ill win, place a bet on scarrin you kid
Cause you look like Shrek fell into a BBQ pit
You aint gotta be rich bitch, you nothing but shit kid
A breathin bag of charcoal, with a durag and twix lips
But get a punch or two, and some flowing dude
Chance of winnin? If each of ya chins drop a vote for you..



WOOoooOOOoooOOOOoOOOoOOOoOOoooooooo o

[Oliver_Thenet]

demik
http://www.411hype.com/forums/attach...tid=2286&stc=1
demik at work
http://www.411hype.com/forums/attach...achmentid=2287


look at demik, kids posing hardcore/
but bitch you aint gangsta...
more like an ewok stand in from star wars/
yea ollie is fat, but im not stupid loser/
cuz it takes a complete idiot
to lose to the anorexic super dooper/
dude wants a pic battle?..
this is fishy straight from the bay/
but at least you'll have a shadow of a chance
since my stomach is in the way/
and son dont want it, i'll blast back/
as far as his wardrobe?..
the damage is done just like that grafh track/
demiks a bum, and it gets worse/
dude if this tourney had a cash prize
id let you win to invest in some better pictures/

[Muffffy]

wack cat, you kids know it, hes flawed
Plus he show it, lookin like Suge Knight mixed with Poet from 'Oz'
(OH JEEZ nice)
Ill poke his mutter with cause, while he jokes and stutters
Glowin? not from sweat, this fucks shavin with butter
(nice)
You trash, ill win, place a bet on scarrin you kid
Cause you look like Shrek fell into a BBQ pit
(LOL)
You aint gotta be rich bitch, you nothing but shit kid
A breathin bag of charcoal, with a durag and twix lips
(hehehe)
But get a punch or two, and some flowing dude
Chance of winnin?

If each of ya chins drop a vote for you..
(LMFAO)

look at demik, kids posing hardcore/
but bitch you aint gangsta...
more like an ewok stand in from star wars/
(haha()
yea ollie is fat, but im not stupid loser/
cuz it takes a complete idiot
to lose to the anorexic super dooper/
(heh)
dude wants a pic battle?..
this is fishy straight from the bay/
but at least you'll have a shadow of a chance
since my stomach is in the way/
(LMFAO)
and son dont want it, i'll blast back/
as far as his wardrobe?..
the damage is done just like that grafh track/
(nah)
demiks a bum, and it gets worse/
dude if this tourney had a cash prize
id let you win to invest in some better pictures/
(heh)


v/demik for obvious reasons...consistency

[Type Flow]

vote- Demik.....cool battle but i think demik's punches were a lil harder and had a more consistant verse...oliver had some aight stuff but not enough for the win

[Super.]

THIS WAS DEFINITELY HOT YO, I MEAN DAMN EVEN OPSHIN BURNIN

[Anaphora]

Demik:
Opener was coo, shrek line was fuckin funny, and the closer was pretty funny too.

Oliver:
Opener was pretty damned funny, but the other lines weren't quite as good, though the shadow of a chance one was pretty good.

Vote: Demik, just more consistent.

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

3-0. More votes please.

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Demik Wins