Back To School Tourney: East Rd. 2 (6. Opshins vs. 14. Part II)

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Old 09-06-2004, 11:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Back To School Tourney: East Rd. 2 (6. Opshins vs. 14. Part II)

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- 10 Lines Max, You dont have to agree on lines either.
- 6 Lines Min.
- 4 Lines for a no show

- Check In atleast 3 hours before battles are due, or Ill count it as a no show.
- Vote on 3 battles, and post links in your thread or tell me which ones you voted on.
- No Biting
- Recycle all you want, but your just out to lose if you do.
- If I sense dickriding Ill subtract votes from your battle, so dont ride your favorite rapper, so vote fairly.

- Verses are due Monday 3am EST/ 12 Midnight Western Time
- Votes are due Wednesday 5pm EST/ 2pm Western
- Threads of each weeks brackets will be up Wednesday night

This a simple tourney with simple rules, so dont get all whinny on me.

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Old 09-06-2004, 11:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 09-07-2004, 12:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Droppin early son

Part II aka Extreme Venom from 1999


Kids lines are invisable ima leave u all hurt an miserable
Cmon dog.... we all know a Part 2 can NEVER be original
Dont step to this son Op gone be chin checkin dudes
How the fuck u the ONLY vet whose never been in a respected crew?
Im droppin the flames see watch as my fists inspect ya
Coz im quick to 'divide parts' like a fuckin movie directa
I know u startin out as the underdog but see i got plans bitch
See im comin simple minded this battle an i STILL got the advantage
All ya lines are old news bro, man i see ya steez is bored
We all know P2 is old shit coz they already came out with 3 and 4


Hope u bringin striaght fiiiiya
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Old 09-07-2004, 02:16 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Part II takes it up the butt!
Op thought I'd be Puss pullin' no shows Retreatin’... but Who I’m fearin’ kid?
Just MIGHT be Pussy wit the blood.. Cuz You ain’t beatin’ me Period
Two hit’s in Myriad’s, While Op Has troubles Munchin’ through clans
He Opens Flows like Ocean’s so it's Hopes he’ll get his Punches to land
No Man, sorry.. None for you… Nope Little guy, not today
You don’t measure pound for pound so you ain’t winnin’ no Weigh
A.k.a Type Flow, Ay?
People usually Adopt a Alias To hide thier first from the Disses
But OPSHINS NEVER HAD A REP, So how the Fuck could he RISK It?
But Get this shit, The Same respected Crews that I joined, You said I didn't
Are the Same Names, you fuckin lame, that you Aim'd & Begged to Get in!!!! lol WTF???





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wow. F-
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Old 09-08-2004, 12:28 AM   #6 (permalink)
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part II-flow had some agiht ish, some iffy, didnt like the directors line, to much like jay's. Best line was the opener, rest was bleh.

Part II, seen the weigh line b4, dunno if it's u or someone else's, but it was eh.

Two hit’s in Myriad’s, While Op Has troubles Munchin’ through clans
He Opens Flows like Ocean’s so it's Hopes he’ll get his Punches to land

best line, closer was str8 too.


ok battle, nothin spectacular tho, coo tho, neway


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lmao....uppin for votes
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Opshizzle

Kids lines are invisable ima leave u all hurt an miserable
Cmon dog.... we all know a Part 2 can NEVER be original
sure why not...

Dont step to this son Op gone be chin checkin dudes
How the fuck u the ONLY vet whose never been in a respected crew?
he was in a crew with you...

Im droppin the flames see watch as my fists inspect ya
Coz im quick to 'divide parts' like a fuckin movie directa
nice concept, poor inactment...didn't like the movie director...

I know u startin out as the underdog but see i got plans bitch
See im comin simple minded this battle an i STILL got the advantage
ok

All ya lines are old news bro, man i see ya steez is bored
We all know P2 is old shit coz they already came out with 3 and 4
huh? What's P2 associated with? didn't make the connection...



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Op thought I'd be Puss pullin' no shows Retreatin’... but Who I’m fearin’ kid?
Just MIGHT be Pussy wit the blood.. Cuz You ain’t beatin’ me Period
lol...nice open

Two hit’s in Myriad’s, While Op Has troubles Munchin’ through clans
He Opens Flows like Ocean’s so it's Hopes he’ll get his Punches to land
aiight

No Man, sorry.. None for you… Nope Little guy, not today
You don’t measure pound for pound so you ain’t winnin’ no Weigh
aiight
A.k.a Type Flow, Ay?
People usually Adopt a Alias To hide thier first from the Disses
But OPSHINS NEVER HAD A REP, So how the Fuck could he RISK It?
truth hammer...

But Get this shit, The Same respected Crews that I joined, You said I didn't
Are the Same Names, you fuckin lame, that you Aim'd & Begged to Get in!!!! lol WTF???
truth hammer...part II


vote equals...Ex to the V for a tighter verse, while Op, just kinda..said shit...1
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he was never in crew with me...i never begged him on aim to be in his crew....gay vote...oh well 2-0 some how
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Kids lines are invisable ima leave u all hurt an miserable
Cmon dog.... we all know a Part 2 can NEVER be original
-Haha, pretty funny.

Dont step to this son Op gone be chin checkin dudes
How the fuck u the ONLY vet whose never been in a respected crew?
-ok ok

Im droppin the flames see watch as my fists inspect ya
Coz im quick to 'divide parts' like a fuckin movie directa
-eh... this is ok, didn't like it at all at first, but it's not sooooo bad.

I know u startin out as the underdog but see i got plans bitch
See im comin simple minded this battle an i STILL got the advantage
-heh

All ya lines are old news bro, man i see ya steez is bored
We all know P2 is old shit coz they already came out with 3 and 4
-another sequel line... but not as good as the first...


Op thought I'd be Puss pullin' no shows Retreatin’... but Who I’m fearin’ kid?
Just MIGHT be Pussy wit the blood.. Cuz You ain’t beatin’ me Period
-Pretty clever opener, but could've been worded a little better.

Two hit’s in Myriad’s, While Op Has troubles Munchin’ through clans
He Opens Flows like Ocean’s so it's Hopes he’ll get his Punches to land
-ehhh

No Man, sorry.. None for you… Nope Little guy, not today
You don’t measure pound for pound so you ain’t winnin’ no Weigh
-not a good pun there... no weigh? could've finished the line better, and the first one was too repititious.

A.k.a Type Flow, Ay?
People usually Adopt a Alias To hide thier first from the Disses
But OPSHINS NEVER HAD A REP, So how the Fuck could he RISK It?
-Haha, pretty nice.

But Get this shit, The Same respected Crews that I joined, You said I didn't
Are the Same Names, you fuckin lame, that you Aim'd & Begged to Get in!!!! lol WTF???
-This is worded really weird... I'll just assume its true, ok closer... would've been better, alot better if it'd been worded well.


Overall: I gotta go with Type Flow or Opshins or whatever, just more consistent.
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For the record... Vote swaying is gay & Ruins battles with meaingless arguments.
Don't Undermine the truth of lines anymore please, keep it clean, gotopshins...

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its not swaying to let the people know ur personals arent true....
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its not swaying to let the people know ur personals arent true....
Wasn't Quick Syllable in a crew with Ion Metatron?
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...vote: opshins...

...he had a couple of nice name punches, the rest was maybe ok...
...part had a couple of really bad wordplay lines, and blahse punches...
...type made me smirk twice...
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its not swaying to let the people know ur personals arent true....
Vote Swaying= Posting anything that undermines the effectiveness of your opponents verse.. & Don't act like you weren't all P's & Q's about joining Antag, I got links &shit ..

*Sigh@ Meaningless Ranting*..

This is why I rarely battle anymore, the thread is now Ruined with meaningless Bickering about Swift Boats Vets for truth & what not.

Whats so hard about letting voters Vote these days?

Fun of this Battle = Officially Killed
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vote=part 2 i dunno y i just liked his verse cause it was cool son.......but u can still eat shit and die
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vote=part 2 i dunno y i just liked his verse cause it was cool son.......but u can still eat shit and die
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