West - 12. Sherlock vs 13. Insense

[6th_plague]

Rules:
Lines Required
-4 Lines for a no show.
-Max 14 Lines
-Min 10 Lines
-You dont have to agree on lines though.

Before The Battle
-You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
-No biting obviously.
-No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
-Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
-Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
-Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

During & After The Battle
-You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
-If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
-You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

Due Date
-Ill be getting the threads up after everyone checks in. Ill give them until Sunday. After that Ill find replacements. But threads will up by Monday morning, & verses will be due the next Saturday. You'll have plenty of time to write, because Ill have the brackets up.
-Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time

If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.

[Insense]

signing in, i'll go 12-14


http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...45#post9007445

[...Sherlock...]

check in

[Insense]

this guys type-happy; but he doesn't fall far from the rest
cause you ain't gotta be a hippie to take a piece to the chest
you can approach me from all angles, and still couldn't attack me
cause i'll leave massive holes in ya face it'll look like you were shitted on by ACNE
Prophet of the streets; when you hear a rucus you know I' am in town, watch ya back
cause I leave bitches screaming in the background like a Kanye track
last week was a gimme;this week he putting his true social skills to the test
making senseless AIM's and phone calls, looking for ghostwritters, like tek does for AVS
but through it all I got much love for you; but with love comes much pain
so here's the nasty divorce from TEXT; leaving you bashing IT like Dain
no longer do you have to worry about verses; your ride in this tourny is through
peep the sig homie, I' am already looking past you

[...Sherlock...]

what were you thinking???

Ill kick an arabic saying, to show dat im better
* *ohh Kitáb-i-Aqdas Lisán'ulláh mahdúd scibby scabber * *
Translation: I CAN TYPE ANYTHING, AND WIN with no effort

man the heck wit dis punk, even da best can get stomped
see i can strecth my linnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnes too, and not connect wit a punch
son is chest to chest wit da pump, da closer he'll ever be
fuck it..... da guage have dis bitch
go through shape forms, like hoes after a pregnacy
someone correct me pleez, Who exactly is this dude????
b'cuz we aint seeing eye to eye, more like conflicting views
more like me just dissing you, In the cents ya could neva hurt me
they say money da root of evil,
and it explains why ya family tree & background is dirt cheap
hands down, i give props when props due, Incense, is well metion
told em i give two thumbs up, but he said hes more into fisting

I get sick of lookin at shit like this....Sherlock shit was stretched in a few bars I rapped the words out loud and they were kinda flowing the dirt cheap line didnt like......Insense your shit was horrible I rapped it outloud it sounded like blah blah blah blah.....punches were ass I thought u put my name in there keep forgettin about that fuckin group.....uhhh...

Vote=Sherlock by a mile

[FaceLesss]

vote sherlock


he was just better

[est.1983]

i honestly was not a real fan of this battle, both had stretched bars (insense's was worse) which led me to get bored easily. But there were a few good concepts and punches that were throw but they all were in the direction of insense. Sherklock did a good job going after insense which is why i think he took this one. goodluck next week.

vote - sherlock

[Imperial]

Both came clever. Insense had a few coo concepts. But he didnt connect that much. His wording was off on a few punches. And dont use piece/peace wordplay ever again. Sherlock was more creative. He was harder, more consistent. Good battle.

Vote: Sherlock

[FórmÅl LôGíc]

Sherlock wins.