West - 1. Charles vs 4. Courtesy

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Old 06-01-2004, 08:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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West - 1. Charles vs 4. Courtesy

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-4 Lines for a no show.
-Max 14 Lines
-Min 10 Lines
-You dont have to agree on lines though.

Before The Battle
-You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
-No biting obviously.
-No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
-Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
-Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
-Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

During & After The Battle
-You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
-If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
-You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

Due Date
-Ill be getting the threads up after everyone checks in. Ill give them until Sunday. After that Ill find replacements. But threads will up by Monday morning, & verses will be due the next Saturday. You'll have plenty of time to write, because Ill have the brackets up.
-Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time

If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.
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Old 06-01-2004, 03:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Courtesy takes it up the butt!
Charrrrlessss..

..should be fun, i'll throw 14 at cha

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Old 06-03-2004, 04:57 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Itll be fun,yes,destroying you

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Old 06-04-2004, 01:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Accidental post ya'l,my bad
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Old 06-05-2004, 06:55 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Courtesy takes it up the butt!
Screw it, i really have no time once again..

..so yeah i'm gonna key somethin

Charles,

It's apparent you think your good, an it's to bad your clarified as a loser..
..america onlines #1 user,
chances of charles winning a battle are more 'less proof' than wine coolers..
charles=wackness it's a fact kid, he wont drop an his tracks wont sell..
..actually, I QUIT
^^ but thats what you should've said 2 years ago in the RBL..
dont take it personal, but your meta's an punches are corny,
..cuz charles shits packed tight
an come to think of it, his verses are about as 'solid' as richard coreys..
so step back dipshit, before i start cippin bitches dude..
..cuz i'll 'kick in' your knees
hard enough for the fbi an SWAT to run through..

just to even it up..

Cut this fag up in pieces, C do it like 99' an still squeezes..
..while you spit i'll check off the facts,
CHECK your wack CHECK your rhymes are weakness..
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Old 06-06-2004, 09:32 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Punchlines,this is how to use em..

Resin style..

Aiyyo..

I don't give a fuck about ur revenge,im raw and lethal
But I hear u do always have the last laugh..
.. Cuz u think slower than most normal people
Im hood, nicca, many bullets spray when i shoot at u
So after..the only organs near ya body...
.. Will be the ones that play at ya funeral
I hate people with dumbass names,im grinin' these herbs
If u had any courtesy uda never tried fuckin typin a verse..
Each bar u drop makes u look worse,so class this opinion,
The last 2 lines didnt 'even it up'..
.. It just further improved my muhfuckin chances of winnin
People flip my name,my pba ego, n any other fillerish cuss'
But your suck a dumbfuck..
.. In your verse u wernt clever enough,to use unorigional stuff!
You're number FOUR in a tourney,this is gotten dirty..
I faced iller in the rbl that can't make it out the bottom thirty
With the girls,this fucking faggot just sucks truly
Cuz only bitch near Court i ever seen was fuckin judge Judy!!!

Sleep,Faggot
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Old 06-06-2004, 10:26 AM   #7 (permalink)
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alright check this out ..

both of you tried to use unique styles with your verses.. both did it pretty well actually..

Courtesy- You had some pretty good lines, and alot of personals towards Charles..

Cut this fag up in pieces, C do it like 99' an still squeezes..
..while you spit i'll check off the facts,
CHECK your wack CHECK your rhymes are weakness..


dope trio of lines to close out your verse. I like that. hmm.. 8/10


Charles- your verse was flames, absolute flames.. the style you used was off the chains .. alot of quotable lines in your verse.

I don't give a fuck about ur revenge,im raw and lethal
But I hear u do always have the last laugh..
.. Cuz u think slower than most normal people

---- dooooooope.

Each bar u drop makes u look worse,so class this opinion,
The last 2 lines didnt 'even it up'..
.. It just further improved my muhfuckin chances of winnin

--- best 3 lines in your verse. 9/10


Both verses were dope. But Im gonna give my vote to Charles.. nice job guys.. return the summerlsam favor and peep LiQ vs. Vern Acular.
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Old 06-06-2004, 02:44 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Courtesy was ok. The fbi SWAT line was coo. But overall, he wasnt too clever. Charles had nice punches the whole way through. Closer was nice, opener was a little played. Organ line was a little played, but flipped nicely. Personals were better. Overall, his verse was jus harder and more witty.

Vote: Charles
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Old 06-06-2004, 11:52 PM   #9 (permalink)
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vote-Charlie..he was better with the concepts he had the better flow and just the better overall verse
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Old 06-08-2004, 09:45 AM   #10 (permalink)
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vote - Charles, in a massacre

he played off his verse a lil, but i';ll have to pick out certain lines i like from courtesy, just to say this was decent, etc.

but i can qoute charles shit in sections, good battle, but court said he was rushed, so be it
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