Summer Slam: East Rd. 1 (6. Wise Punchlines vs. 11. Trinidad)

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Old 05-25-2004, 03:09 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Summer Slam: East Rd. 1 (6. Wise Punchlines vs. 11. Trinidad)

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-4 Lines for a no show.
-Max 14 Lines
-Min 10 Lines
-You dont have to agree on lines though.

Before The Battle
-You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
-No biting obviously.
-No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
-Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
-Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
-Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

During & After The Battle
-You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
-If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
-You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

Due Date
-Ill be getting the threads up after everyone checks in. Ill give them until Sunday. After that Ill find replacements. But threads will up by Monday morning, & verses will be due the next Saturday. You'll have plenty of time to write, because Ill have the brackets up.
-Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time

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Old 05-25-2004, 10:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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.. Checks in

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Old 05-26-2004, 03:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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im here goodluck kiddo
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Old 05-29-2004, 12:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wise-Punchlines takes it up the butt!
My grandma just past away,comp got a virus and i sprained my wrists..
And while explaining this as a key i still wouldnt have as many excuses as this bitch..
Who the fuck are you..Never been worth shit and thats not hating..
Cuz i really thought he must have a net worth with all those gross statements..
Your best battle strategy is to just take cover and run..
I dare you take me lightly..i'll darken your day like clouds covering the sun..
I'll expose you quick..and you know the kid jus has to do it..
You are moving up in this world..Only cuz they allow homosexual marriage in massachusetts..
You'll always be a nobody..noone has ever said your nice..
A horrible flow with more forced punches then an instigated fight..
You check in first then dont post you got some nerve right?..
I'll win you come out looking like a pussy..kinda like ax's after their first strike..

you arent even worth my time p out kid
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Old 05-29-2004, 01:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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wow Wise that sucked.
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Lol ^ .. Crac'ka Jak is statin' the facts ..... Opinions not the case,
Or you being wack would be all over the news like the return of Mase
Punchline wanted to step to me hard .. so he rocking bowling shoes,
I tried to attempt some personals .. but no ones ever heard of you
Watch Wise lose to Blood like he just ejaculated to a porno flick,
He thinks his crew run shit cuz 1/2 of em hosting the tournament,
You swear you big
.... But Closest
Ya get to being on top of the thread was your name in Formalogics sig
This bitch is like islamic prisoners .. you getting emabarrased in the east
& He wanted people to know hes hard so he uploaded a striptease
I aint wanna have to break da news .. & be da 1 to tell you this,
But I havent seen such wackness exposed since Nasif's Alias
He aint score shit wit his girl .. so n'igga asked for an extension,
Cause Your raps is like in 30's .... In the state of depression
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Old 05-29-2004, 11:07 PM   #7 (permalink)
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vote=wise..both came extremely weak...but blood used a punch ive seen before and is totally irrelevant personal

Punchline wanted to step to me hard .. so he rocking bowling shoes,
I tried to attempt some personals .. but no ones ever heard of you


wise is known MORE than u..how the fuck does that even go with wise...godddd
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Old 05-29-2004, 11:26 PM   #8 (permalink)
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nice battle
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vote=wise..both came extremely weak...but blood used a punch ive seen before and is totally irrelevant personal

Punchline wanted to step to me hard .. so he rocking bowling shoes,
I tried to attempt some personals .. but no ones ever heard of you


wise is known MORE than u..how the fuck does that even go with wise...godddd
.. Fuck a text .. this shits fun

& did you forget hes in your crew dumbass ?

0-0 still
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lol herb...u lost..ur still wack at everything
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Old 05-30-2004, 12:20 AM   #11 (permalink)
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close, i saw nothing special .. so i can't really vote on nething .. sorry ..
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Old 05-30-2004, 02:08 PM   #12 (permalink)
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WP-your verse was ok, but it was kinda wack in a way. How you gonna have the name wise-punches without any,hmmmmm

Bloodshot-your verse was ok as well, but it was better then WP's so i had to give it to you

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hmmm...

Wise Punchlines - Well considering your name, an wha you brought to the table.. wasnt very 'wise' at all, favorite line would have to be "I'll expose you quick..and you know the kid jus has to do it../ You are moving up in this world..Only cuz they allow homosexual marriage in massachusetts.." Other then that it isnt very good.

BloodShott - Much better punches, liked most of 'em, cant say i could pick a certian one for a fav, just all togethor went better togethor, beat wise easily..

Now for a lil something else.. UH Opshins? dawg i unno wha your talkin about but, but Blood came way better then Wise.. so stop votin against blood just cause he KO'ed you in your guys' battle.

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Summer Slam: East Rd. 1 (8. Placenta vs. 9. Tony Elbow)

Summer Slam: West Rd. 1 (7. Word up vs. 10. Est. 1983)

Summer Slam: East Rd. 1 (3. Opshins vs. 14. Verse4tile)
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this battle was nothin special.

no1 in my mind came hard, both still need elevation.

but blood had better punchlines in his, they also made more sense.

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Old 05-30-2004, 11:25 PM   #17 (permalink)
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this battle was pretty weak...wise...your verse really didnt do anything for me...nothing really stood out....your lines were weak and just didnt do the job....i expected more from you....bloodshot...it was a decent verse...but wasnt consistant...a few lines were ok..others weak..others horrible...but you just did edge it out over wise...barely..b/c neither of you came with a very good showing..bloodshot just had a better verse by a line or two..

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Old 05-31-2004, 02:10 AM   #20 (permalink)
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I agree with most cats votin' on this thrizzy: wise came pretty weak. Didn't do anything for me, and I didn't like the intro at all.

Blood came straight, some real hot lines in there. Personal and Striptease bars were hit.

Better punches, better flow, Gotta go with:

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